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feliciakw February 7 2010, 13:20:12 UTC
Ooh! Ooh! Ooh! Squeee!

*off to actually read the fic*

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 14:37:35 UTC
Glad you are happy and squeeing! Enjoy Felicia, hope it works for you!

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feliciakw February 7 2010, 15:37:27 UTC
Yes, indeedy. Eagerly awaiting the next part.

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 16:22:40 UTC
It's coming. It is painfully slow but I'm workin' on it. *types faster*

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kimmer1227 February 7 2010, 14:04:03 UTC
Good stuff, Debs!

As I was reading, it seemed so familiar. I forgot I read that early draft. *headdesk*

Bobby's in trouuuuuuuuuble.

Can't wait for more!

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 14:37:05 UTC
Well, shit! I should have put you down up at the top as another pair of eyes! Let me go change that. Your input helped bunches!

Oh and btw. Thanks for reading and commenting! I kind of like that Bobby is in trouble. *grins*

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kimmer1227 February 7 2010, 14:56:44 UTC
My retinas are just fine, thank you very much. I love our brainstorming sessions, but they are your wordies. I just poke you with a big stick. Poking is fun!

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 16:23:33 UTC
*rubs poked ribs, looks for bruises*

Nope! I'm good!

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minx999 February 7 2010, 15:10:34 UTC
This is great! I like the old west setting very much. I love all the little details you've added. They make this come alive. :)

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 16:17:31 UTC
Thanks. I do love our boys in the west. It kind of feels right doesn't it?

I am glad you are enjoying this! Thanks for dropping by to tell me.

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debbiel66 February 7 2010, 16:07:56 UTC
Okay, you had me with the title... I love this verse you've got going here and your portrayal of the boys' relationship just pulls me in. So well done - thank you!

Sam seems to ponder it a minute.  “So how do you know about my grades, Dean?”

“I know everything little brother.   Don’t think for a minute I don’t.”.

Happy sigh. More of this please!

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 16:20:27 UTC
Ah, Deb. Your comments always make me smile. I love that Dean is watching out for Sam and that there is nothing he can do about it.

Secretly, I think Sam kind of likes it too.

Glad to see you are still reading this verse. There is more coming...I'm just sllooowww.

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debbiel66 February 7 2010, 16:32:44 UTC
You know though, slow just means there's something to look forward to. :)

Speaking of slow, are you doing a Big Bang? (maybe something else to look forward to...)

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 16:34:44 UTC
BIG BANG Have you lost your ever-loving mind? I can barely churn out little farts!

Probably not the analogy you were thinking of but you catch my drift. Big Bang for you?

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brigid_tanner February 7 2010, 17:17:31 UTC
YES!!! So delighted you continued with this!

Told ya how much I love westerns, and you've done a great job putting our guys into the old west. Feels very right. It's the guys we know with just enough change in speech patterns to suit the time period. Love the details like Sam's little gun and Dean's fling with the redhead. How the hell is Sam going to *hold* a derringer to fire it?

Bobby's gonna get his ass kicked! But seriously, John fucking Winchester tells you to keep your mouth shut, you're gonna do it. Until Sam's puppy dog eyes and Dean's determined face come at you. Can we have more immediately?

ETA: Forgot to say "Please". Please can we have more?

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saberivojo February 7 2010, 17:36:08 UTC
I'm writing the Bobby part now. *grins* I do love Bobby in hot water. 'Cause you are right, John tells him to keep his yap shut and Dean is pissed and needing info and then Sam melts his heart? How can Bobby say no for long. *pokes Bobby*

I'm glad it's workin' for you Brigid. I know I am having far too much fun writing. You know, like SCHOOL. I NEED TO STUDY. I never thought about Sam actually being able to put his big old grizzly mitt fingers onto the trigger pull of a little derringer. *giggles*

*kicks nursing book and opens up new word document*

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