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saberivojo

New fic - Oh Five Hundred

Aug 15, 2009 07:16

Oh five hundred.

Dean slapped the alarm clock.

Well, fuck.

Dean groaned. His throat felt like he had eaten crushed glass last night and honestly he did not think that was the case. He curled over on himself, pulling the blanket across his body and shivered a bit. Eyes slitted, he leaned over the edge of the bed and spat into the trash can ( Read more... )

teen!chester, pre-series

Comments 91

embroiderama August 15 2009, 13:09:36 UTC

Awww, that's awesome!

saberivojo August 15 2009, 14:37:44 UTC

Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for letting me know.

bt_kady August 15 2009, 13:36:43 UTC

I think we all can join in for a collective awwww for Sammy. What a cool brotherly thing to do - and a rockin' story! LOVED it! I'm definitely rec-ing this one!

saberivojo August 15 2009, 14:38:46 UTC

Yeah, Sammy loves his big bro. Glad you loved this and I appreciate the rec! *blushes*

chocca2 August 15 2009, 14:00:56 UTC

This is adorable!

*pinches Sammy's cheeks* Best lil bro!

Then, tongue to the roof of his mouth he tasted smoke, whiskey and girl.

Fav line! This is a great lil fic!

saberivojo August 15 2009, 14:40:48 UTC

I think that was my fav line too. Thanks for letting me know what worked for you. I am a writerly work in progress so specific feedback helps!

pekover August 15 2009, 14:04:26 UTC

Yay for good-Sammy! It's nice to see him being the one looking after Dean for a change.

saberivojo August 15 2009, 14:42:17 UTC

Well, Dean looks out for Sam all the time but I have a feeling that Sam would have his back.

minx999 August 15 2009, 14:45:01 UTC

My icon says it all. This was so cool! Sammy showing his love for his big bro by getting up and doing the detailing. Just awwwwww!! And I do love John's sense of irony in his punishment. Yeah 3 hours sleep with a hangover is a killer, heh. Very cute story!

saberivojo August 15 2009, 14:53:05 UTC

Yeah, well you know John would like to slam it home, not just detailing the car, but making sure that Dean knew it was a five o'clock wake up call too. What better way to call attention to dragging your ass home at 2am?

Yup, Sam loves his big brother.

cldyalwys August 15 2009, 15:17:45 UTC

This was too cute, Sammy looking out for Dean, awww, I love it. And the creative punishment, seems like a very John thing to do. It was very well written and I enjoyed it a lot.

saberivojo August 15 2009, 16:06:44 UTC

Thanks. Of course Sammy looks out for Dean. Glad you enjoyed this.