Fic - The List

[saberivojo]

Title:  The List
Characters: John and Dean
Rating:  PG for cussing.  Gen.
Word Count:  2000ish
Summary:  The first time John is left with Dean.

AN:  So…I asked for prompts and flinchflower wanted to know about the first time John was left with little Dean.  Quite a bit of the story is taken from the personal Saberivojo archives.  Tis true. *Swears.*

Comments

[irismay42]

Heh heh, brilliant! I can so imagine this happening! (And nice to see Dean has always had a good appetite!)

[saberivojo]

I suppose if he'd said - milk with extra onions we wouldn't have been surprised!

[kms726]

I loved this! Ah, the New Father Experience! This was adorable. I loved how John was proud of Dean for his projectile vomiting. And yes, he really should've read Mary's whole list first and save himself a lot of mess. Thanks for writing this!

[saberivojo]

Glad you liked! Of course John would love something that could in some way reference projectiles and his kid!

[brigid_tanner]

LMAO! This is why my children are 4-legged and I am proud to say I have NEVER changed a diaper. Loved it. So happy you found some time to write.

[saberivojo]

Four legged children have their own issues! Diapers are not one of them! It felt good to write, even if only 2,000 words. I need to write, it helps so much - I just wish I had a little more time or inclination to write. Still, tiny steps right?

[sandymg]

That was glorious. I loved the Marine references and all the little details. Excellent.

[saberivojo]

Marine references make me happy. So glad you picked up on them and liked it!

[embroiderama]

John took a step back, surveying the crying baby, whose legs were now peddling in an effort to push himself back over on his tummy. He was going in.

“Fire in the hole, champ.” John said determinedly to his wailing son.

Oh wow! I'm stuck between LOL and ADORBS. This is awesome.

[saberivojo]

I kind of liked tha one too, glad you found it amusing! Thanks for reading dear!