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sabaceanbabe

another Help_NZ drabble, sort of...

Mar 11, 2011 15:52

chaila43 won some 100-word drabbles from me for help_nz. She said, "I'd LOVE Riley and Sarah from either of their POVs, like if Riley knows of Sarah from the future, or Riley and Cameron, again from either POV," and here is the first of them (although the first drabble kinda comes with a Sarah voiceover which is longer than the drabble itself):

( voiceover )

charity, my tscc fic, drabbles, sarah connor chronicles, my fic

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sabaceanbabe March 12 2011, 05:03:37 UTC

Whew! I'm so glad you like it. The others are coming -- I just have to rewatch a bit of s2. :)

roxybisquaint March 16 2011, 10:27:06 UTC

I wish I could explain how that little bit of writing played out in my head.... There was dramatic sound effect, and extreme tunnel-visiony close-up on Sarah's pupils and then ... "Hi mom" cutting through it all.

Everything you write is so visual. I love it.

sabaceanbabe March 24 2011, 16:12:41 UTC

Just your description of your reaction makes me HAPPY. Hee! Thank you!