Comments | sabaceanbabe: BSG fic: Freefall (pg-13)

sabaceanbabe

BSG fic: Freefall (pg-13)

Oct 25, 2010 11:25

Title: Freefall
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3,711
Betas: ancarett, mrsdrjackson, and lyssie
Focus: Cally Henderson Tyrol
Characters: Cally, Tyrol, Tory, Hotdog
Summary: She floats, spinning endlessly, out of control...
Warnings: implied major character death
Author's notes: This was written for Remix Duello 2010 and is a remix of frolicndetour's amazing Light at the End (the Sympathy for ( Read more... )

my bsg fic, my fic, remix

Comments 9

murry_duck October 25 2010, 15:58:31 UTC

This.is.perfect. Thank you!

sabaceanbabe October 26 2010, 20:36:26 UTC

\o/ Thank you!!! *squish*

murry_duck October 27 2010, 12:56:02 UTC

*squishs back*

korenap October 26 2010, 10:28:52 UTC

Nice. Feels completely like Cally from beginning to end.

sabaceanbabe October 26 2010, 20:36:58 UTC

Excellent! Thank you so much! :D

lizardbeth_j October 26 2010, 17:18:58 UTC

aw, poor Cally. :(

Nice job stitching up the various retcons as well.

sabaceanbabe October 26 2010, 20:37:32 UTC

BSG is all about the retcon, man, I swear. Glad it worked for you.

trovia October 27 2010, 10:19:37 UTC

This is lovely. You know, every time I see you post fic, I'm like, "It's by sabaceanbabe. She writes well. I should read this!" But then, I usually don't have time, despite having loved the few fics I know of you. I'll have to remedy that one day. But it's nice to be able to click on a fic and to know it's going to be a good read no matter what it's about. You just have a very smooth and precise writing style that makes it impossible to be bored, even in a story like this in which we don't learn anything new, strictly speaking.

I was particularly fond of the scene with Hot Dog, but then I'm a Hot Dog fan and terribly biased about him.

sabaceanbabe October 27 2010, 21:07:12 UTC

*blush* Thank you so much, Trovia! This comment made my day. :DDD