BSG ficlet - Running (g)

Apr 24, 2010 18:16

Title: Running
Rating: G
Word count: 484
Focus: Kara and Kacey
Beta: none
Warnings: none
Author's note: I wrote this a few weeks ago for taragel when she was having kind of a crappy day. Today, I realized that the only place I had posted it was as a comment in Tara's journal. So, here I am, sharing it with the wider BSG fandom. :P Enjoy!

She runs silently down the mostly dark and gray metal hallway. )

my bsg fic, my fic, my bsg fic: s3

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vipersweb April 24 2010, 22:28:27 UTC
this is very cute. I like the reference to Kara's ultimate fate.

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sabaceanbabe May 8 2010, 01:46:18 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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imelda72 April 25 2010, 01:04:32 UTC
I read this when you originally posted it, and loved it. It's always a treat to read a Kara/Kacey interaction that might have happened in canon, off-camera. This one's so great because it's from Kacey's POV, very unusual. I love that she still thinks of Kara.

My favorite line, though, might be this: she slams into something both soft and hard. What a perfect description of Kara Thrace.

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sabaceanbabe May 8 2010, 01:48:59 UTC
Thank you so much! I was actually kind of surprised that I wrote it in Kacey's POV, 'cause I know nothing about children, but that's how it wanted to be written.

I love your icon.

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scifishipper April 25 2010, 01:20:07 UTC
This is a lovely fic. You've captured the child's mind well. It's very sweet and pure. Well done.

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sabaceanbabe May 8 2010, 01:51:05 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

BTW, do you know what's going on with lastficauthor? I had to skip two challenges in a row because of RL and when I got back, all posting seems to have stopped... :(

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scifishipper May 8 2010, 02:11:39 UTC
Yeah. The comm seems to have died. The mod hasn't posted to LJ since the day after the last challenge was posted. I used my second skip that week, too. I feel bad for the authors who wrote fics and they never got posted. It sucks. :(

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exbex April 25 2010, 02:29:02 UTC
I love the Kacey POV, and your Kara dialogue; a fic that says a great deal with a few words.

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sabaceanbabe May 8 2010, 01:51:42 UTC
Thank you so much (and I'm sorry it took so long for me to reply to this).

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sunshine_queen April 25 2010, 04:06:47 UTC
Aww, this was so sweet and sad. Poor Kacey and Kara!

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sabaceanbabe May 8 2010, 01:52:13 UTC
Thanks for reading! :)

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