Comments | sabaceanbabe: BSG ficlet: Gone (G)

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BSG ficlet: Gone (G)

Apr 07, 2009 11:51

Title: Gone
Author: sabaceanbabe
Rating: G
Word count: 339
Focus: Helo, Helo/Kara (no, not like that)
Spoilers/warnings: Spoilers for the end, and it's a little bit maudlin.
Author's note: Written for the Mourn the Fallen Challenge at Kindreds, not betaed.

( His vision blurred and he lifted his eyes to watch the fire, dancing to its own internal music. )

my bsg fic: s4, my bsg fic, my fic, challenge responses

Comments 53

rayruz April 7 2009, 16:18:23 UTC

You made me start crying, holy crap. :( Beautiful, beautiful ficlet. I've always love their friendship and tend to love any fic that explores that.

sabaceanbabe April 7 2009, 16:27:18 UTC

*hands you a tissue*

Thank you so much and I'm sorry I made you cry.

Helo and Kara were (ARE, frak it all!) my POV characters for the show, so I'm glad this worked for you.

rjsteamboat76 April 7 2009, 17:27:18 UTC

this was absolutely beauftiful! i have tears in my eyes. such a wonderful little ficlet!

sabaceanbabe April 7 2009, 19:42:42 UTC

Thank you, m'dear. *hug*

spooky_xphile April 7 2009, 17:30:44 UTC

*sniffles*

That's so evil of RDM to not have a Kara and Helo good-bye scene. But I don't think this would make it so much sweeter if he had written a good-bye. (if you couldn't interpret the mess I just said, I gave you a compliment.)

sabaceanbabe April 7 2009, 19:43:37 UTC

*hands you a tissue*

LOL! Thank you so much! :D

luridmuse April 7 2009, 17:40:15 UTC

*sniffle* *sniffle more*
no words

sabaceanbabe April 7 2009, 19:44:08 UTC

*pets you*

*clings*

shah_of_blah April 7 2009, 17:47:17 UTC

This is lovely. Thank you.

sabaceanbabe April 7 2009, 19:44:50 UTC

Thank you! :D