Dollhouse fic: To Dance in a Burning Building (pg)

Mar 12, 2009 16:20

Title: To Dance in a Burning Building
Author: SabaceanBabe
Rating: PG
Word count: 770
Focus: gen; Paul, Echo, Sierra, Topher, Boyd, Adelle, Laurence
Summary: Trapped in a burning room, what would be the first thing you do?
Disclaimer: All belongs to Whedon and Fox. Sadly.
Author’s note: written for dollhousefics Challenge #004: instinct. It’s not betaed, so ( Read more... )

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snowpuppies March 14 2009, 05:57:07 UTC
Oh, I like that. Your characterization is spot-on for everyone!

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sabaceanbabe March 15 2009, 03:05:19 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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obiwahn March 14 2009, 06:45:24 UTC
Oh wow, this was brilliant, and considering this week's episode, the title is eerily clairvoyant ;-)

I love that Echo wants to save Boyd and Claire, and I really liked the scene between Topher and Boyd.

Very well done!

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sabaceanbabe March 15 2009, 03:07:42 UTC
Oddly enough, I had no idea that this week's ep involved a fire until I watched it just now. I was trying to decide between a thunderstorm and a fire as to what uncontrollable thing to use to get people to react by instinct, and I figured a fire was more likely to have an effect on the Dollhouse.

Anyway, thank you so much. I'm happy you liked it. :D

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dariclone March 14 2009, 23:47:04 UTC
Absolutly wonderfully well written. I particularly liked the segment with Boyd. His devotion to finding Echo was completly in character.

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sabaceanbabe March 15 2009, 03:08:51 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and I love the way Echo's and Boyd's relationship is developing.

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