Request Fic: Kiss | DCU/Smallville | Clark/Lois | PG | 1/1

May 01, 2008 17:01

Title: Kiss
Fandom: DCU/Smallville
Pairing: Clark/Lois
Rating: PG
Word Count: 933
Prompt: For svgurl - Clark/Lois, First kiss (in the SV universe)
Summary: Lois remembers a lot more than Clark realizes.
Disclaimer: DC and WB own it all. I own nothing. Darnit.
Author's Notes: The first of the request ficlets for my 1 year LJ anniversary! This really wasn' ( Read more... )

fandom: dcu, ch: clark kent, ch: lois lane, ch: superman, fic: ficlet, .fic, pr: clark kent/lois lane, fandom: dcu: smallville, fic: request fic

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svgurl May 1 2008, 23:35:54 UTC
OMG! That was just brilliant! I love it. Thank you so much! *hugs*

I loved how Lois remembered ... it made me all giddy. Clark being so freaked out and Lois being all calm ... adorable.

“Would you stop gaping, Smallville? Forget feeling guilty - prove to me you still know how to kiss like that.” Grabbing his shirt with one hand, she pulled him close, and snatched off his glasses with the other.

Brilliant!

Thanks again! This made my day!

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saavikam77 May 1 2008, 23:55:22 UTC
Hee hee!! ^_^ I'm so glad you liked this, hon. *hugs back* I guess I just see this Lois as being far more put together than Clark is. :p

Thank you!!

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ancarett May 2 2008, 00:58:37 UTC
This was fun -- a great shout-out to L&C:TNAOS with the stake-out set-up, too, but I love the whole Smallville vibe you've set up perfectly.

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saavikam77 May 2 2008, 03:01:24 UTC
Glad you liked it. ^_^ I wasn't even thinking of L&C. Maybe everything from that show has wormed its way into my subconscious. :p

Thanks!

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taro_twist May 2 2008, 01:14:46 UTC
Woo, awesome! You nailed their voices perfectly--I totally heard Tom Welling and Erica Durance here. Ahh, and poor Lois--she has missing memories in so many universes! Yay for her getting the red K ones back, though. And I love how Clark can say nothing but "Um ..." when he realizes she's figured him out, while she's completely nonchalant.

Forget feeling guilty - prove to me you still know how to kiss like that.

YES! This fic rocked. :D

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saavikam77 May 2 2008, 03:02:55 UTC
Hee hee!! Thanks! ^_^ I'm glad I got their specific characterizations right. :p

And poor Clark... I just feel like he'd have no idea what to say in this situation. *pets him*

*dances* ^_^

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babettew54 May 2 2008, 01:38:29 UTC
Aww, she remembered! And Clark, in his 'deer in the headlights'!!! *LOL* That was really good! Reminded me of TNAoS and their 'first' kiss! Only in reverse!

Loved it!:D:D

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saavikam77 May 2 2008, 03:04:22 UTC
I just hate to leave my Loises with missing memories. :p

Thank you!! I guess L&C has worked its way into my subconscious. ^_~

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saavikam77 May 2 2008, 19:43:44 UTC
Glad you liked! ^_^ I can't help but love Lois - in any incarnation! :p

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