Comments | saavikam77: Fic: Can You Hear It? (DCU - Clark/Bruce) 1/1

saavikam77

Fic: Can You Hear It? (DCU - Clark/Bruce) 1/1 - PG-13

Dec 04, 2007 23:29

Title: Can You Hear It?
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,842
Summary: Clark just won't stop staring at the Kryptonian habitat in the Fortress zoo.
Disclaimer: DC and WB own it all. I own nothing. Darnit.
Author's Note/Prompt: Written for the World's Finest Gift Exchange. Prompt #F39:

I'd like a story that explores ( Read more... )

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saavikam77 December 5 2007, 18:33:11 UTC

Ah! Thank you! ^_^ They definitely needed that final laugh to break all that tension and melancholy.

me_ya_ri December 5 2007, 18:11:23 UTC

Such a wonderful fic! Poor Clark all yearning for what he can never have and Bruce bringing him out of it. You have such a way with words! *Happy sigh*

saavikam77 December 5 2007, 18:34:07 UTC

Thank you so much!! ^_^ *twirls*

starsandsea December 5 2007, 19:05:17 UTC

Ohhh! I love this fic! It really shows Kal's alienness! You did a wonderful good job with it. :)

Kal scrutinized him for a moment. “They're saying you're dehydrated and need to take a nap.”

Hee!! :)

saavikam77 December 5 2007, 20:30:13 UTC

Thank you!! ^_^ I'm glad I hit the mark with this.

Isn't joking around!Clark just adorable? :p

schala_kid December 5 2007, 22:31:45 UTC

I like this type of fics that explore Clark's alieness, he loves earth and its people but there's a part of him that will always be from Krypton.

And Bruce is patient and understanding with Clark even though he can't relate to him he tries to give him his space and he listens and cares and I love the way you write Batman :).

saavikam77 December 6 2007, 03:09:12 UTC

Glad you liked this! ^_^ Yes, he may be Kansas raised, and loyal to the Earth and everything on it to a fault, but there will always be that tiny spark within him that longs for Krypton.

Isn't Bruce made of awesome? ^_^ He would have waited for days for Clark to say something if he'd had to.

Thanks so much!!

januaried December 5 2007, 23:08:36 UTC

Oh wow, I loved this! Any exploration of Kal-el's alienness is fascinating to me, especially with physical descriptions of what he sees and senses; you did a really good job with that. I'd love to see more in the same vein!

saavikam77 December 6 2007, 03:10:39 UTC

Haha! Glad you liked! ^_^ I really enjoy delving into Clark's biology/physiology, exploring what makes him tick and how he sees the world.

I may just write more along these lines at some point once the holiday rush is over. :p