Fic: Tango | Superman I(/Batman) | Clark/Lois, Bruce | PG-13 | 1/1

[saavikam77]

Title: Tango
Fandom: Superman I(/Batman)
Pairing: Clark/Lois, hint of Lois/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,061
Prompt: For the 2010 DCU FFA Spring Porn Fest, by way of the 2010 DCU FFA Summer Challenge: Reeveverse, Clark Kent/Lois Lane, tuxedo, heels, identity, 'plain old Clark'
Summary: Waiting for Clark to meet her at a charity fundraiser, Lois

Comments

[januaried]

UNFFFFF. That description is totally hot and I'm so fascinated that that's how other people see the manip (having created it, I have a hard time seeing it as a depiction of a moment rather than in a more technical light). There's some serious bouncesqueeing going on over here! It's Lois's crazy imagination, and Clark unexpectedly hot, and Batman! And the last line is just glorious. Wonderful job, I'm so happy that image inspired you! *tackleglomps* XD

[saavikam77]

Heeee!! Thank you so much, hon! \O/

I tend to see images and automatically transcribe them to description in my head. :p

And the last line was totally an add-on before I posted. I'm so glad it makes the whole thing work! ^____^

*glomps back* Thanks for such great inspiration!

[lilacs_roses]

1) ok... you have to wonder what the (purpose of the) original pic was for.

2) Wonderfully done manipulation.

3) ... Nicely and well done fic! Thanks so much for sharing!

[saavikam77]

The original pic was so weird, wasn't it? Rizny did a fabulous job on the manip over it.

Thanks so much!! :D

[athenesolon]

*tentatively raises her hand*

I know this is an old comment but I felt it still deserves an answer. I kind of asked for it (at the time I was working on a fic which had the Reeveverse Lois and Clark dancing a tango as part of it.)

Although since then I think Riz (januaried's) manip and icon has taken on a life of it's own (of which I love to begin with.)

[ava_jamison]

OMG this is gorgeous--is fantastic! Thank you for sharing. Beautiful! Lovely, visceral, delicious imagery. Love the sleek 'up and away' bit you subtly worked in and Lois thoughts at the end--WOW!

[saavikam77]

Thank you so much! :D *blushes*

The last line was a total last-minute add-on, and I'm so glad it worked out like it has.

[ava_jamison]

The last line is perfect, and gives a perfect ending. But I actually was even more wowed by the bit that begins: iClark sans glasses, tux jacket, and tie. And continues on for THAT particular gorgeous paragraph:)

[saavikam77]

Ah! I was totally going off of the manip at that point. :p Rizny did such a fantastic job on it, I'm so glad I did her work justice in words. :)

Thanks!!

[jlvsclrk]

Ooh, yes, I can just imagine Lois's shock at seeing Clark out of his normal hayseed clothes. And she got a tango! Is Bruce playing matchmaker?

[saavikam77]

I think her heart might've stopped there for a minute. :p And yeah, I sort of imagine Bruce playing matchmaker behind the scenes there, helping Clark get spiffied up for Lois. ^_~

Thanks so much, hon! :D

[athenesolon]

Ok only a few sentences in I started smiling like the Joker and by halfway through I had to stop reading because I was giggling and squeeing in delight and then had to start again from the beginning because I lost where I was at.

Loved how Lois is shocked by the image of a well-dressed Clark. Was absolutely adoring how she had that sudden image of dancing with him and was loving every single solitary word.

I love dance-fics. There can never be enough of them in my mind.

I also think Bruce was playing a bit of a matchmaker. I can just imagine Bruce at Clark's apartment saying, "Is this all you have?" and then dragging him out to his personal tailor to get a good tux fitted.

[saavikam77]

Heee!!! \O/ I'm so glad you liked this, hon! I know how much you loved the original manip (as evidenced by your icon :p), so I'm glad I managed to do it justice.

And hehehe... I think Bruce was *definitely* playing matchmaker, there. ^_~ I could see Clark being all flustered and not really understanding why his one gray 'dress' suit just wouldn't cut it. XD

Thanks so much, hon!

[athenesolon]

I could see Clark being all flustered and not really understanding why his one gray 'dress' suit just wouldn't cut it. XD

LOL. AAAAAAA-Meennnnn.

[athenesolon]

Oh, and I also am having an image of Bruce teaching Clark to tango (an interesting tidbit about the tango-is originally was danced almost exclusively by men).

Clark: "You want me to put my hand where exactly?"

XD