Ficlet: Out of the Ashes | STXI | Pike/Number One | PG-13 | 1/1

Dec 03, 2009 18:45

Title: Out of the Ashes
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Chris Pike/Number One
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 819
Summary: After the dust settles, One receives her marching orders, and Chris doesn't take the news as badly as she does.
Disclaimer: Paramount and CBS own everything. I own nothing. Darnit!
Author's Notes: I finally wrote Pike/Number One! :D It ( Read more... )

ch: number one, ch: christopher pike, fandom: star trek, .fic, pr: christopher pike/number one, fic: ficlet, fandom: star trek: xi

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saavikam77 December 4 2009, 00:19:31 UTC
Yay! Thank you so much! :D I've been wanting to write One for a while now, so was pleasantly surprised when the muse finally hit me.

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boosette December 4 2009, 00:09:08 UTC
Mere words cannot express how much I love this story, and the easy comradarie you've given Our Heroes, and omg omg omg the USS Obama! YOU NAMED A SHIP THE OBAMA.

And ONE. And her AWESOME sense of humor, example of:

A genuine snort of amusement escaped her in response, and he saw her shoulders shiver with an otherwise silent laugh for a split second. Just enough to break up the heavy pall of their conversation. "You're worse than your pet Cadet-Captain. Always have been."

I HEART IT.

In short:

... )

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saavikam77 December 4 2009, 00:23:16 UTC
Heee!! XD *dances in circles with utter glee*

I've been wanting to write these two and this particular story for ages, and was so happy when the muse struck. And yeah, I couldn't let this pass without the USS Obama. ^_~ I can't get enough of ship naming, which was the original starting spark for this fic months ago anyway! :p

And I'm SOOOOO glad I got One right, and their dynamic. ^____^

*clings to free internet* XD THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

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boosette December 4 2009, 00:27:07 UTC
I ... kindof want a whole series of action adventure stories written about the Obama and their antics, and I also want to see that series sent - not to the tptb - but to the President. (I think he'd get a gigantic kick out of it.)

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saavikam77 December 4 2009, 00:38:16 UTC
Gah! Yes! \O/ I'd seen the name on ships in other people's fic, and I *SO* couldn't resist using it. I think the President would get a wonderful kick out of reading fic about a starship named after him. :p

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rubynye December 4 2009, 00:32:20 UTC
Oh, this made me cheer aloud. Life being lived, so much in the small spaces, and such lovely established-relationship flirtation. *applauds*

PS I like the ship names. *wink*

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saavikam77 December 4 2009, 00:40:31 UTC
Yaayy!! \O/ Thank you so very much, hon. ^___^ I really loved layering in all the nuances of their relationship here.

And of course, I just couldn't resist the nods to the President and our favorite Kryptonian, as well as putting One on the ship that will eventually be the Enterprise-A. ^_~

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taraljc December 4 2009, 00:40:42 UTC
This is just gorgeous! And I love the idea that she rises from the ashes, and Pike is able to support and love her 100%, and want to see her out there having awesome captain-y adventures no matter what, whether he can be a captain by her side or not.

SO AWESOMESAUCE.

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saavikam77 December 4 2009, 00:48:26 UTC
Hee!! Thank you! :D I just couldn't see it going any other way, b/c I think he'd love her and respect her just that much. ^___^

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sleepygoof8784 December 4 2009, 02:40:14 UTC
I loved this. I like how well they know each other, the deep emotions they both try to hide but can read on each other. This was just wonderful.

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saavikam77 December 4 2009, 03:09:44 UTC
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you liked this.

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