Comments | saavikam77: Fic: Hero's Lament | DCU/SR | Clark/Lois/Richard/Lana | NC-17

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Fic: Hero's Lament | DCU/SR | Clark/Lois/Richard/Lana | NC-17 | 1/1

Jul 27, 2009 15:17

Title: Hero's Lament
Authors: saavikam77 & anissa7118
Fandom: Superman Returns
Pairing: Clark/Lois/Richard/Lana (yes, you read that right!)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,135
Prompt: Originally for the Porn Battle and for rizny's graduation: Richard/Lois/Clark/Lana, foursome, bed, tumble, love, comfort, slick, hilarity
Summary: After a large-scale rescue goes terribly wrong, ( Read more... )

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saavikam77 July 27 2009, 20:59:58 UTC

Hee! Thanks so much! :D The choreography of the foursome was definitely tricky, but I'm glad I made it work.

bradygirl_12 July 28 2009, 00:06:01 UTC

Wow! Hot and exciting! :)

I like the way you brought out each one's personalities during their approach to hawt sex. ;)

And yay for Lana being a redhead! That's the way I'll always think of her. :)

saavikam77 July 28 2009, 01:03:00 UTC

Thanks! :D

Most of the personalities was due to the awesome notes on the characters that Anissa provided and her personal touches in the editing phase. If not for that, this would have been a lot more smut and a lot less real H/C. :p

The Lana in the LS/Heirs-verse has been a redhead from the get-go, and just fantastic, based on Annette O'Toole's Lana from Superman III. :) The ladies did a great job choosing her for Richard's love interest and really developing her character.

Thanks again!

genclay July 28 2009, 08:41:17 UTC

*yay*

Ever since I read LS's this is how I've personally seen the relationship growing. It's great to have a chance to read it.

saavikam77 July 28 2009, 14:23:15 UTC

It does seem to work on a different level than people would expect, I think. :p Of course, this is only AU of that 'verse, but it's a nice break from the tension and drama in Heirs.

Thanks so much! :)

uraniachang July 28 2009, 10:32:55 UTC

Ha, I've always thought that if Superman were real he would have ended up with this multiple partners thing.

Thank you for sharing!

saavikam77 July 28 2009, 14:24:15 UTC

Yeah, I can easily see it, though my usual tastes tend more toward Clark/Lois/Bruce. :p

Thanks so much!

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saavikam77 July 29 2009, 00:12:55 UTC

ROFL! XD It's even bleeding over into the Aftermath-verse! :p

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aramirandme81 July 28 2009, 13:06:35 UTC

Nice and hot. :)
Always knew Clark was a kinky one.

saavikam77 July 28 2009, 14:24:49 UTC

Hehe... And I consider this fic actually pretty vanilla! XD

Thanks so much! :)

anissa7118 July 30 2009, 04:47:43 UTC

He is, isn't he?

Ever read Clois bondage? Check this out: Unfamiliar by the coauthor of this fic and her regular coauthor.

Sorry, Saavi, I'll quit pimpin' pr0n on your journal.

saavikam77 July 30 2009, 04:49:48 UTC

Pimp away, m'dear! ^_~

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