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mithen July 15 2009, 04:56:39 UTC
Wow, that's a slice of a lot of lives! I think my favorite touch, somehow, was Ollie flipping the burgers way up in the air--that and Lois having to lecture the kids about the proper way to make fires. :) It's really cool to see everyone together like this... Nice work!

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saavikam77 July 15 2009, 12:29:58 UTC
It is, indeed! :p I'm glad you liked those touches. Couldn't resist poking a little fun at Ollie there. ^_~

Thanks so much, hon! :D

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bradygirl_12 July 15 2009, 17:43:18 UTC
Whee! A perfect entry for this Challenge, m'dear! :)

It was so much fun to read about the families and friends and how the younger generation is coming along to take on the older one's duties and responsibilities, but they still have fun!

Roy and Dick and Lian are the sweetest family, and, aw, you brought in Steve for our Amazon! :) Bart and B.J.'s romance is so sweet, and the parallels to Bruce and Clark are amusing. :)

Also, Ollie as a fiery cook? Oh, yeah! :)

I love Lois' tartness and her ability to ride herd on all these powerful personalities.

And the grill made to Alfred's specifications? Of course! :)

I'll be putting up a notice for this story before I go to bed! ;)

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saavikam77 July 15 2009, 19:18:59 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! ^___^ I had fun putting everyone together for this fic, and just *slightly* rearranging canon to make it all fit. ^_~ And of course, I couldn't overlook Roy and Dick, or Diana and Steve!

I'm glad my Lois came out right, too. I see this version of her as being sort of the default mother hen of the whole group, very much Mama Bear Mad Dog Lane. :p

Thanks again!

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jlvsclrk July 16 2009, 05:41:21 UTC
This was just so lovely - a wonderful summer's evening just making s'mores and worrying about the kids. As for Lois, I imagine it would be rather daunting to be 49 and have a husband who looks like Clark, but if anyone can cope with it, it's her.

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saavikam77 July 16 2009, 13:16:05 UTC
Thank you so much! :D I think Lois is a lot more secure than people sometimes give her credit for. He might be more-or-less perpetually young, but he loves her like crazy, and she KNOWS it. ^__^

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barb1808 August 29 2010, 19:26:40 UTC
Aww.

This is such a wonderful story. The fire and warmth in it is warming me entirely at this early autumn evening over here.

Although I don't know all of the characters here the story works well and you gave enough info for me to understand the different relations.

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saavikam77 August 29 2010, 19:53:47 UTC
Thank you so much! ^____^

I'm glad this warmed you up, and that it wasn't too confusing. I mixed a lot of comics canon into the Aftermath-verse for this one, and it was hard balancing it so everyone reading would know what was going on.

This is the one fic I'd really hoped would be nommed for the SMFA, but wasn't. *shuffles feet*

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