Fic: Command Decisions | Star Trek XI/TOS | Kirk, Pike (gen) | PG | 1/1

May 20, 2009 18:15

Title: Command Decisions
Fandom: Star Trek XI (with hints of TOS)
Characters: Jim Kirk, Christopher Pike (gen)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,281
Summary: After the Enterprise returns to spacedock, Pike summons Kirk to his office for a chat about Jim's future.
Disclaimer: Paramount and CBS own it all. I own nothing. Darnit.
Author's Notes: Missing scene ( Read more... )

ch: christopher pike, fandom: star trek, .fic, ch: james kirk, fic: fic, fandom: star trek: xi, fandom: star trek: tos

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saavikam77 May 22 2009, 22:38:42 UTC
Thanks so much, hon! :D I'm so glad I got them right in this. Especially Kirk. He might be a cocky bastard on the outside, but I'm sure there's more going on in that noggin' of his. :p

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dreamlittleyo May 24 2009, 06:00:44 UTC
SO SATISFYING! And I loved Kirk's internal musings, comparing the original timeline he learned about from Spock Prime's mind meld with this new timeline that jumps him even further ahead of the flock in getting his command.

And this:
Pike's stern expression softened into a grin again. “Good. Now that that's settled, you might as well get out of here and get to work. You're gonna be a busy man between now and, oh, the rest of your career.”
*adores* BEAUTIFUL!

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saavikam77 May 24 2009, 13:32:24 UTC
Hee!! :D So glad you like this, hon. I just couldn't resist having Kirk know just how much earlier he was getting his captaincy. Talk about a shock!

Glad you liked my Pike, too. He just seems so much like a father figure to Kirk. :)

Thanks so much!

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watervole May 27 2009, 16:16:59 UTC
Thanks. This feels very real - especially Pike telling him he'd better pass his exams!

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saavikam77 May 27 2009, 17:05:10 UTC
Thank you! :) Glad you liked.

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yanyann May 30 2009, 11:36:57 UTC
Great story!

Now I have a plotbunny with Jim running around trying to learn everything he needs to and then Spock and the others come in to help. (which then results in everyone (except Bones) to think 'OMG he actually has a brain' XD).

Hope to see more from you!

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saavikam77 May 30 2009, 13:11:48 UTC
Thanks! That would be an awesome fic, I think. XD

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igrockspock June 11 2009, 00:05:26 UTC
I love this! It's so going to be part of my personal canon.

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saavikam77 June 11 2009, 00:34:01 UTC
Hee! Thank you! :D

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