Comments | saavikam77: Fic: Come Undone | DCU | Jason/Tim | PG-13 (this part)

saavikam77

Fic: Come Undone | DCU | Jason/Tim | PG-13 (this part) | 2/3

Apr 22, 2009 18:38

Title: Come Undone - Part 2
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Jason/Tim
Rating: PG-13 - this part
Word Count: 921
Prompt: For dcu_freeforall: shower; for 50_darkfics: dirty
Summary: After a long patrol leaves them exhausted, Tim helps Jason get clean. More realizations are had.
Disclaimer: DC and WB own it all. I own nothing. Darnit.
Author's Notes: Still pretending that BftC ends with ( Read more... )

series: come undone, series: together

Comments 20

darthbatgirl April 23 2009, 00:47:20 UTC

You can't stop there! I want more!

And yes Tim is going to analyze this to bits.

saavikam77 April 23 2009, 01:07:24 UTC

Hehehehe... ^_~ I know. I'm evil.

Poor Tim's gonna beat himself up the next day, for sure. XD

Thanks!!

mithen April 23 2009, 00:54:35 UTC

Mmmm. Hair washing is something of a thing of mine. It's the care and attention and vulnerability of it, all of which you capture beautifully here. And very hotly. :)

saavikam77 April 23 2009, 01:10:20 UTC

^___^ It's funny how sometimes treating a scene with simplicity creates a bigger impact. And here I'd thought I'd lost my mojo completely. XD I love the intimacy of a shared shower, and all that comes with it, too.

Thank you so much, hon!

elenorasweet April 23 2009, 01:04:31 UTC

*pokes Saavi* But first there will be sex, right? Sex, then analyzing.

I really love that Jason was serious about the rules of driving. *hugs him* You've got some adjusting to do, Jay-bird!

saavikam77 April 23 2009, 01:12:29 UTC

Heehee!! XD *is poked*

Oh yes, there will *definitely* be sex first. ^_~

And poor Jay. He's, well, more than a little messed up about his new role. Daddy Bats did a serious number on him, I'm afraid.

Thanks so much!

slicensmile April 23 2009, 03:06:47 UTC

Vulnerable!Jason... is turning out to be a kink button I didn't even know I had. Mmm.

saavikam77 April 23 2009, 04:21:46 UTC

Hehehe... I love my vulnerable Jay Bird. ^_~ *cuddles him*

Thanks so much! Glad you like.

larsinger29 April 23 2009, 03:49:29 UTC

I love that this is being told from Tim's POV. I didn't notice it so much in the first installment, but in this part it really struck me. The uncertainty you convey him as having, and the fact that he is already analyzing (albeit on a reduced level due to his fatigue) this situation really helps drive the emotions of this part home.

Well done! I'm so looking forward to the next part...and the sex, hehe. :o)

saavikam77 April 23 2009, 04:23:18 UTC

I'm not even sure why I started writing this from Tim's POV. It just sort of happened. I do think it works better this way, though. I love his analytical brand of emo, especially playing off of Jason. ^_~

Thanks so much! Part 3 should be up tomorrow.