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sophiap December 11 2007, 11:26:56 UTC
I love each of these, and I love how you trace the progression (or regression) of their relationship.

You mentioned expanding one of the "almosts?" I found March's especially intriguing. Matt's boss's reaction is interesting, and I would love to see that whole scenario fleshed out.

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saathi1013 December 13 2007, 04:03:44 UTC
Hm. I think that march's scenario is one that does deserve an expanded treatment (any of these do, which is why I'm considering labeling this a WIP or 'rough/sketch' fic), but I am not sure I am up to it yet. Must rewatch old eps, I think. And also watch more procedural shows so I can actually write a believable cop scene...

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rogueslayer452 December 11 2007, 11:41:38 UTC
Very interesting take, and I'm impressed you managed to place all this in drabble format. Not easily done, especially with smut or, in this case, implied smut taking place.

What I like most was how you managed to prolong their interaction in relationship terms, and how it took so long to establish that very fact. It did take its time to get there, undergoing many changes in their lives and everything around them (especially the secrets getting out and Matt exposing his ability and so forth), but in the end it was all worth it. :D

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saathi1013 December 13 2007, 04:09:59 UTC
thanks!
and I like prolonged "falling-into" relationship fics, myself (can you tell? :D), esp. when you have such different personalities.

I hope they *do* explore the possibility of the heroes out in the open (aside from the 5 years later persecution-gig).

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teecub December 11 2007, 12:17:00 UTC
Man I love how you set this up! Going through the different months, reaching each part and the gradual changes - this was am awesome story! Thank you so much for sharing it! <3

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saathi1013 December 13 2007, 04:11:18 UTC
thanks for reading! and the lovely comments, esp. as I was worried about its 'finishedness' prior to posting. :)

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00smut December 11 2007, 12:17:16 UTC
Oh, perfect. Each scenario better than the last. They each merit a full story but together it just has such a great tone.

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saathi1013 December 13 2007, 04:11:59 UTC
thanks!
and I think I have to mention your icon cracks my shit up each and every time I see it.

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tiptoe39 December 11 2007, 12:50:12 UTC
OK, this? Owns me. And your YouTube idea (and text)? Kills my Redfile.com dedder than ded. I fail, you win, end of story.

:dies:

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baehj2915 December 12 2007, 17:42:57 UTC
between you, saathi, and that fucking creepy primatech website, I'm actually starting to want to see shit like this. Then again, I'm a sucker for conspiracy theories. Also I don't remember posting, but if I did, I'll tell you again. The redfile.com idea was super cool.

*the world bank and the vatican, you say? why yes, i would like to hear your theory homeless man who claims he can fly*

~love from WI
JLB

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saathi1013 December 13 2007, 04:45:53 UTC
*hee*

now I'm having a hilarious mental scene of Mo and Mulder having a conversation. *cackles*

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saathi1013 December 13 2007, 04:14:12 UTC
*scoffs* your redfile.com idea? genius. I simply used the teenager version. yours is a lot more likely to effect change in the heroesverse.

no fail for you! be alive so you can write more fics!

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