Oretachi no Omoide - Chap 16

Jun 17, 2010 20:08

Chapter 16: In which lonely hearts just hurt each other…Toma mumbled a weak ‘Tadaima!’ when he arrived home then kicked off his shoes and headed to his room. Jun turned hi glance from the TV to Toma when the younger boy entered the room but he went to his room without even looking at Jun. And this totally dumbfounded Jun ( Read more... )

arashi, g: angst, p: junma

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fancyann1974 June 18 2010, 02:19:22 UTC
aaahhh poor toma, likes jun so much
then jun had to go and call him ma-chan
cant wait for the next update
thank you for sharing

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saana_13 June 18 2010, 05:05:50 UTC
thanks for reading^.^ I'll do my best with the next chap;)

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adeyakana June 18 2010, 04:02:55 UTC
poor Toma...
I know he's love Aiba but he must not do that to Toma...

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saana_13 June 18 2010, 05:07:06 UTC
thanks for reading!

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jaja_emiko June 18 2010, 04:15:59 UTC
okay, jun is being an ass towards toma now... but then again, ma-chan could be a nickname for toma... there's ma in toma rite?? LOL!! XD

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saana_13 June 18 2010, 05:00:18 UTC
okay, that could be... (actually, I didn't think about that there's a 'ma' in Toma too XD) but we all know that this 'Ma-chan' was addressed to Aiba...
thanks for reading!

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jaja_emiko June 19 2010, 04:40:32 UTC
hehehe~!! i was just sugar coating the fact for toma! i knew that jun was actully calling for aiba-chan. XD

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kireina_sora June 18 2010, 10:32:30 UTC
I have to say toma doensnt hav his luck lately =.="
first the marriage w sho and now jun mistook him for machan =.="
poor toma T^T
good work saana-san ^^
love you *kiss you*

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saana_13 June 18 2010, 11:18:38 UTC
a feel I'm starting to be too cruel to Toma...:( but I promise I'll make it up to him;)
thanks a lot for reading, sweety!^.^
love you, too;)

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people_around June 20 2010, 00:43:18 UTC
Even though I feel bad about Ikuta, and I know that Matsumoto should be a bit more gentle towards him, I think Matsumoto is just human and letting go of someone he loves won't be easy nor fast.
Well, maybe it's just me, but I like the heartbreaking aura of this chapter.

Thank you for writing!

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saana_13 June 21 2010, 14:50:38 UTC
yeah, it's really hard to totally let go your loved one...
thanks a lot for reading!:)

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