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Thanks for noticing, Boss - Ch 7 - Notes and noticing

Oct 09, 2009 18:57

Title: Thanks for noticing, Boss (Ch 7/7)
Author: SA3466996
Rating: PG-13
Category: Angst/ Friendship
Genre: Gen (Gibbs/DiNozzo friendship)
Pairing: None
Character(s): Gibbs, DiNozzo, Abby
Summary: Gibbs reads the lists Tony wrote in Anthony's Weakness. Anthony makes a decision that has a profound effect on his working relationship with Gibbs. ( Read more... )

angst, fic: thanks for noticing boss, character: dinozzo, series: resignation, fic, gen, character: gibbs

Comments 10

fredsmith518 October 9 2009, 21:12:50 UTC

very good idea, once again love the neat dovetailing into canon
very glad you wrote this part

now you need a new focus? ...or is there another section perking?

sa3466996 October 10 2009, 16:07:44 UTC

Thanks very much. Can't remember whether I've said this before, but when I first started to write this story I'd intended to stop at the campfire/pep talk scene and let canon from the show speak for itself. It just didn't work - although Gibbs had read the lists, he hadn't really let Tony know that he knew about them. I thought it was important that he did that and that they talked.

As for what's next? I'd definitely like to do another character study type piece for Tony and tie it into canon (esp given what MW's said about DiNozzo's possible character development for later in S7) but I'm holding off until more of the season has aired. In the meantime, I'm working on Ailing, Agents adrift, some Tony/Abby pre series stuff and no doubt I'll do a few one-shots as the season progresses.

karababe_64 October 9 2009, 23:46:25 UTC

Really enjoyed this fic and how you linked it with Bounce.

sa3466996 October 10 2009, 16:16:16 UTC

Thanks very much. ;-)

Bounce has to be one of my top 10 fav episodes so far (hence the tie in) and I loved it when Gibbs called Tony 'Anthony'.

weird_fin October 10 2009, 13:45:09 UTC

Have enjoyed this story.

sa3466996 October 10 2009, 16:20:53 UTC

Thank you very much. Very glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers for reading and commenting. ;-)

murgy31 October 11 2009, 19:52:45 UTC

I loved it! It was fabulous!

sa3466996 October 11 2009, 21:30:48 UTC

Thanks. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. ;-)

Cheers for reading and reviewing. Hope you have a good week.

jadebear07 October 12 2009, 23:01:20 UTC

This was incredible. Just amazingly heart-wrenching and yet so satisfying at the end. The way you wove this into the actual episode was seemless. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!

JB

sa3466996 October 17 2009, 13:28:40 UTC

Thanks very much. *g* Glad you liked it.

Some stories I really like to try and tie into an epsiode quite strongly and this was definitely one of them. Also, I couldn't have all that introspection and angst and not have them 'clearing the air' and reaching some kind of understanding at the end so I'm really glad that worked for you. ;-)