Fic: Not caring

Jul 26, 2009 23:01

Title:  Not caring.
Author:  SA3466996
Rating:  PG-13
Category:  Angst
Genre:  Gen
Pairing:  None
Character(s):  DiNozzo
Summary:  Tony's thoughts in the elevator before he comes face to face with Trent Kort in the squad room in 'Bury Your Dead'.
Spoilers:  Bury Your Dead
Disclaimer:  NCIS characters belong to Bellisario, CBS and Paramount.  No copyright ( Read more... )

series: behind closed doors, angst, character: dinozzo, fic: not caring, fic, gen

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sasha1600 July 27 2009, 02:40:33 UTC
You've done a great job of capturing Tony's pain here, and the way he basically shuts down to protect himself. Is there a sequel where he starts to care again?

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sa3466996 July 28 2009, 07:09:03 UTC
Thanks. Hadn't thought about a sequel to this particular one but I do like the idea of him starting to care again and I think I know exactly where it could happen in the time line. I'll jot a few things down and see whether it works.

Cheers Sasha.

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weird_fin July 27 2009, 06:21:08 UTC
Loved it.

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sa3466996 July 28 2009, 07:10:29 UTC
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)

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fredsmith518 July 27 2009, 07:08:12 UTC
most intense

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sa3466996 July 28 2009, 07:13:23 UTC
Thanks. In a good way, I hope. ;-)

Cheers Fred.

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fredsmith518 July 28 2009, 07:57:58 UTC
:) yes good writing conveying such a sense of despair alongside Tony's coping mechanisms

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ncismom July 27 2009, 11:40:43 UTC
Wow! Again, I'm in awe. Wonderfully done...I can literally feel Tony's page leaping off the screen at me! Great job, my friend.

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sa3466996 July 28 2009, 07:29:49 UTC
Thanks. You know how much I like Tony angst. ;-)

Take care, my friend.

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iwantpie July 27 2009, 14:50:52 UTC
Awesomely written, as usual. You always do such a great job of getting into Tony's head, IMO. XD

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sa3466996 July 28 2009, 07:44:56 UTC
Aw, thanks. I do like delving into Tony's mind and exploring his insecurities. Although, that's only one aspect of his character. I need to explore his pent up anger more, I think. ;-)

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