Behind the Sex - Chapter 20

Mar 13, 2012 10:39

Title: Behind the Sex
Fandom(s) : U-KISS
Pairing(s): KeMaru
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Romance

Warnings: Awful!English
Author's Notes: My second NaNoWriMo, and a rather bold decision, if I might say :)! Hopefully doesn't contain too much inaccuracies, and if it does, please ignore it? >_>?

Kibum kept his smile, eyes showing a different, serious glint. “You’ll see.” )

behind the sex

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ext_681672 March 17 2012, 17:34:03 UTC
Aiyo, not first already.

"Kevin warned Kibum against paying for the time, though happily agreeing to Kibum paying for the food." Lol Kevin is a cheapo.

"How could he just cry from sexual frustration?" Because he's a whore.

And lol at Kevin being so candid about him being a slut around middle ages men. He's really treating Kibum more like a friend than a patron.

If Kevin is moaning like that now, isn't he exposing himself in the future when they have sex? Like Kibum will know that it's just him faking it?

Kibum is such a bitch, how can he do this to his dad. His dad is already nice enough to let him go screw prostitutes everyday. But then again, if the prostitute is Kevin, I would go screw him everyday too HAHAHA.

"That there’s more to paid sex than just sex." HUH WHAT?! IS THAT LIKE A HINT OR SOMETHING.

I feel that at times, Kevin forgets his relationship with Kibum and just treats him like a friend/lover.

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ext_681672 March 17 2012, 17:38:06 UTC
My comment is so incoherent HAHAHAHA k sorry this is what happens when I get distracted by Gmarket then come back to comment lol.

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s2_otter March 19 2012, 11:59:10 UTC
HAHAHAHA, wah this time very far behind worh :3 ( ... )

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yejunsaranghae March 19 2012, 05:53:33 UTC
<3 I love this chapter. It's so sweet. <3 The conflict in this fic is so amazing. <3 It's complex, yet simple at the same time. I love it. <3 Have I told you lately that I love you?

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s2_otter March 19 2012, 11:53:41 UTC
I'm glad you did, haha, aww <3
Really :3, HAHA, complex and simple wahhh!
That makes me oddly happy ^^

I love you too <3 Whether before or right now, I love you too <3
Thanks for commenting!

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