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Plight of a Fallen Angel

Oct 04, 2011 13:01

Title: Plight of a Fallen Angel
Fandom(s): U-KISS
Pairing(s): questionable!SeopVin, Kemaru
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Horror
Word Count: 5,044 words

35 U-Kiss Fic Challenge Prompt: 16. Cracked Open Ribs [Kevin/Kiseop ( Read more... )

challenge, one shots

Comments 26

winterflowr October 4 2011, 06:15:18 UTC

Wah!!! I was so scared--Poor Kevin! All those things that Kiseop did to him--it will probably haunt him forever!

On the other hand...that was a very good horror story! I was on edge the whole time!

s2_otter October 5 2011, 05:24:05 UTC

Haha, yay for being scared :P
Yeah, sadly it would.

Thank you! Hehe, yay!
And thanks for commenting!

salanglove October 4 2011, 12:51:36 UTC

i cried.... i wasn't sure if kiseop would be the bad guy or not. i love kiseop but HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MY KEVIN!?!?!?!? *sighs hugging kevin* its okay kevin ill kick kiseops butt for you

s2_otter October 5 2011, 05:25:19 UTC

Haha, I'm sorry!
It was either Kevin or Kiseop and I guess Kiseop fitted the cold, pretty demon, and Kevin's like the bubbly thing so that's how their roles were chosen xD
Thanks for commenting!

salanglove October 5 2011, 13:19:52 UTC

Its okay still liked it ^ ^

ext_681672 October 4 2011, 14:09:50 UTC

YOU ARE SO SICK, I REFUSE TO COMMENT ON THIS FIC.

ext_681672 October 4 2011, 14:26:57 UTC

Just kidding. I love you ( ... )

s2_otter October 5 2011, 05:36:28 UTC

<3 Why you so cute xD?
I love you too~!

In my head, it was a lot more gruesome, scary and painful, but I'm a horrible writer so I don't describe well enough to do the plot justice :(
But yeah, I guess you're a complete sadist too!

Kevin fell down from a hole in the clouds. It technically isn't anyone's fault :3
Kiseop is a demon~ He kissed Kevin because of appreciation of his beauty / induce fear lol. There's no real reason, he just "loves angels"

Hahahahhaa, it was supposed to be funny :3!

Yep it's Kemaru! Haha, and yeah, Kevin was being ironic actually.
Kiseop is the one belonging to hell haha.

Short Kemaru because yes it's Seopvin, but also because I only wanted to show Kevin's change from a happy angel to a scarred one.

I loved this comment! Haha, it's so long and cute <3
I hoped you slept! Thanks for commenting~!

CRAZY MASTER. meanie! :P happy_girl89 October 4 2011, 15:05:50 UTC

oh, you are a very, soul-less writing creature. I HATE YOU!
why torture Kevin. (but why do i care? i loved it just like how Kiseop! XD)

Anyway.. guess what?! This is your second fic where you torture Kevin.... and you're a crazy torturer (atleast Kibum is a good guy here.. not a killer. :D)

Oh, you don't suck at horror! Ithought it would be all horror! Good thing there are things to keep some fics uhmm..... ALIVE? XDD

really great! thumbs up! -big grin-

Re: CRAZY MASTER. meanie! :P s2_otter October 5 2011, 05:41:35 UTC

Hahaha, aww I'm sorry~

Ah, the Killa one was Kevin torturing himself actually haha!

Haha, I couldn't write all horror, it's just too difficult for me T___T
So yeah, it became like this xD

Thanks for commenting and liking! <3

kawaii_nachan October 4 2011, 16:36:38 UTC

That's so scary! Poor Kevinnie has to go through that all..
And Kiseop, he's a very cruel demon! It really doesn't fit his cheerful image.. Lol
But the story is very good. I like horror story, to be honest.
Maybe you can make another horror story in the future. ^^

s2_otter October 5 2011, 05:44:45 UTC

It was scary? :3
Yeah! Mean Kiseop rofl, but I always thought when he smiled without having his eyes becoming smaller, it was slightly creepy so this is the result of that HAHA
I'm thankful and glad, I really cannot write horror and I'm glad this turned out somewhat well :)
Aha, I don't know, will see if inspiration strikes~!
Thanks for commenting~!