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Dongho Understands - One Shot

Apr 03, 2011 19:26

Title: Dongho Understands
Fandom(s): U-KISS
Pairing(s): broken!Kemaru, friendship!Dongvin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 2,100 words

Warnings: Awful!English
Author's Notes: I know I’m not the first using 0330 MV as an inspiration, but the main character here isn’t Dongho, so :3

( Dongho still thinks there’s a fish that’s way too fishy. )

one shots

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thyfloatinglily April 17 2011, 15:32:48 UTC

/Regrets not reading this earlier.
The impact would have been alot harder and I would have cried.

Gosh this is quite the...apt.
I like the build up of this, like how you actually made it seem like kibum was actually there (oh the phone call was leading on...) But soon after it was like revelation. The mv's exact scenario on someone else instead. And this time even more painful.

It's fitting how dongho's the one trying to shake Kevin out of his trance (:

Just a little question:

“Put yourself in my shoes. Think of what you acted in the music video, because how I act was how you act, and how you act is how I’m acting. I’m worried for you, I don’t want to see you go down that road.”

Who's saying all these? I got a tad bit confused...? Dongho? But then my shoes?
(argh it's probably just me. Ignore)

s2_otter April 18 2011, 11:26:01 UTC

What does earlier have to do with impact 0.0?

Yeah, it's supposed to, because Kevin's too used to Kibum's answer, he sorta predicts what Kibum would say to him in his head :)
Yep, it had to be exact because 1, I couldn't think of anything that revolves around his career other than those. 2, Dongho would realise why it felt so familiar :D Deja Vu~

Yep, cause Dongho understands :3

Dongho said that. Um, the two other lines are by Kevin, so duh? XD Other than that, Dongho was comforting Kevin out of his hallucinations, so he wants Kevin to understand his intentions. :)

Thanks for your comment ^^
You do know how much it means to me ^^~