Always Ch3

Jul 04, 2010 21:57

ALWAYS - CHAPTER III

The empty, heavy silence that followed Kame’s words was beginning to make Taguchi’s chest feel as though it was caught in a vice so he shook his head and coaxed his voice up out of his throat.

“You…you can’t think like that Kame-chan, it wasn’t your fault, if you’d known what was really happening I know it wouldn’t have ( Read more... )

multichap: always, pairing: koda, genre: angst

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deirdre_diuran July 4 2010, 21:44:05 UTC
..... WHY?!

*cries*

okay, this isn't good... I'm gonna have to go write some angst to get over this now XD

And I know what you mean, feeling like you're ruining their lives-- ever read Snow Petals and Sakura Michi? XD

thanks for the update nee~! Even though I fel like strangling something with all these cliffies XD

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ryunuka July 5 2010, 08:41:01 UTC
I'm sorry I'm doing such horrible things to them!
Uwah, please don't cry!!! D:

Yep, I read Snow Petals, but I'm really crap at commenting, so might as well say now, I loved it, it was totally awesome and amazingly written, and I so nearly cried when Ryo died, especially because for a split second there he was the old nice Ryo T^T

Sorry for the evil cliffies, but this was originally a oneshot, and I spent ages splitting it up carefully to turn it into a mini-multichap so the result was evil cliffhangers galore :P

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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deirdre_diuran July 5 2010, 17:45:44 UTC
lol it's okay, I know the feeling XD

Yay!! That one's gonna stick with me for a while, I think O.o especially cause I wrote my favourite poem around the same time, also entitled Snow Petals, so I'm reeeaaallllyyy happy you liked it! And I definitely cried when Ryo died XD (cause I'm a crybaby, though no one believes it)

haha I udnerstand~ I was just teasing XD I do the same thing when I split up a big document lol

I'll comment so long as you keep it up~ lol

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messyboo July 5 2010, 01:53:56 UTC
OMG KOKI!!!!
this is sooo heartbreaking...thanks for this...i'm looking forward to the next one...poor tat-chan, poor kou-chan...*sobs*

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ryunuka July 5 2010, 08:44:27 UTC
I know, I'm an evil person, glad you're liking it, even though it's so sad, thank you lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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snow_meow July 5 2010, 02:48:32 UTC
What a mess of things! Why is Koki so stubborn and blind to realise he is hurting Ueda?

I am still trying to figure out who is the one who is dead.

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ryunuka July 5 2010, 08:50:18 UTC
Yeah, Koki is dumb and ferociously self-destructive.
All will be revealed next chapter, thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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dorayaki_chan July 5 2010, 10:57:44 UTC
Ha ha ha if they read it they probably just laugh at this fic can wait for your final chap :)

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ryunuka July 5 2010, 13:17:23 UTC
Yeah, I hope they'd just laugh and not be mad at me for screwing up their lives, even if it's only fictional :P
Last chap comes tomorrow, thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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fancyann1974 July 5 2010, 12:49:41 UTC
so sad and heartbreaking
koki why not just talk to ueda
cant wait for the next chapter
thank you for sharing

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ryunuka July 5 2010, 13:23:33 UTC
I know, I'm an evil horrible person and I'm sorry -bows until head touches the floor-
Next chapter will be up tomorrow, thanks for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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