Finally!~ An update!~ I admit I was a silent reader but seeing this update made me so happy I had to comment.v(^_^) I hope Ryo and Tat-chan finally get to say to each other what they were planning to say before the accident happened. Thanks for the update!~ Great Job!~ CHU!~♥♥♥♥♥
Sorry it keeps taking so long, once my exams are over I can get down to finishing this one completely, only two more chapters to go, and probably and epilogue, so watch this space :P Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^
I wish it didn't keep taking me so long, sorry about that >.< Once I'm done with assignments and exams I'll be able to finish it off, thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^
It's sweet, but seems a bit rushed... your grammar tends to confuse itself around the dialogue here, and so does your phrasing. But it's generally all right. XD
And this amused me to no end, I have no idea why: loosening her hold only long enough for them to toe off their shoes. I think you meant 'take off'? 8Dv
Some of my spelling and grammar was a little off because I was trying so hard to get it done (and yet it still took three months >.<) I did mean 'toe off' though, it's a British colloquilism I think (I'm not sure if it gets used in America or not). It's the way of describing how you take off your shoes without untying them, I do it all the time, but my mum used to yell at me for not untying my laces :P Hopefully the next chapter will be better because I won't have to rush it and I'll be able to write it all around the same time. Thanks lots for reading and commenting Kellie-chan~! ^_^
I actually learn British English, since I'm Asian. /sweats/ but I've never heard of it! It's a new phrase to add to my dictionary! /autoadds/ and I also do that all the time. XD All my shoelaces are in double knots for this purpose. ♥
Sorry it keeps taking so long! Thanks for the luck, after the exams are over I'm sure I'll be able to update properlly. Thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^
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I admit I was a silent reader but seeing this update made me so happy I had to comment.v(^_^)
I hope Ryo and Tat-chan finally get to say to each other what they were planning to say before the accident happened.
Thanks for the update!~ Great Job!~
CHU!~♥♥♥♥♥
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^
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Once I'm done with assignments and exams I'll be able to finish it off, thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^
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It's sweet, but seems a bit rushed... your grammar tends to confuse itself around the dialogue here, and so does your phrasing. But it's generally all right. XD
And this amused me to no end, I have no idea why: loosening her hold only long enough for them to toe off their shoes. I think you meant 'take off'? 8Dv
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I did mean 'toe off' though, it's a British colloquilism I think (I'm not sure if it gets used in America or not). It's the way of describing how you take off your shoes without untying them, I do it all the time, but my mum used to yell at me for not untying my laces :P
Hopefully the next chapter will be better because I won't have to rush it and I'll be able to write it all around the same time.
Thanks lots for reading and commenting Kellie-chan~! ^_^
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i hope everything will be fine
and gud luck for your exaxm
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Thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^
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I was missing this one alot.
Good Luck on you exams.
I will definitely wait for the next chapter.
Thanks fro sharing.
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Thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^
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