Pink Pyjamas Challenge Entry - Paint My World

Oct 06, 2009 18:36

I know I should have posted this like...three months ago but I didn't because I fail -_-
Plus, I totally mised
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genre: general, pairing: ryoda, oneshot

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sashjun October 6 2009, 19:48:11 UTC
I was waiting for so so so long to flail on this fic because I loved it very much, when I read it on that chalenge and I knew it was you who have written it!

Ok here I go!
“He’s too short?” Ueda muttered,
LOOOOOOOOL I love it when Ueda is sarcastic

Now they finally had some sort of use.
Yay! for clothes recycling, especially the way the do it!

Pi I so don’t want to know…whatever, bye!”
I do, please write it? XDDDD

mix of Nirvana, Remioromen, Radiohead and Mr Children while they worked.
I kind of approve ... a lot!!! btw I know I am just picking the most random lines but asgjkfdllvasjkx they are so so cute together!

... without warning leapt up, brushed his paintbrush over Ryo’s nose. Ryo blinked in surprise.
heh, here you have it!

Ryo pulled slowly at the collar of the shirt, dragging Ueda’s face close enough to kiss him breathless, sliding his hand beneath both shirts to play ...
this whole paragraph is just so awesome, sexy but gentle and argh ...

“Ryo, only you could find pink pyjama’s sexy,”I don´t think so .. I so agree ( ... )

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ryunuka October 20 2009, 12:23:06 UTC
I am so slow to reply recently, gomen >.<

I'm really happy you liked this, I wasn't sure if it was any good when I entered it but I kinda thought 'what the hell' and went ahead with it :P

Thank you lots for the awesome comment~! ^_^

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sono_kiseki October 6 2009, 21:38:12 UTC
DX damn, sashjun-senpai. DDD:

Anyways this spot is for me until the evil finals are over and done with. *cries*

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sono_kiseki December 7 2009, 13:27:49 UTC
Some points I wanted to point out ._.

"“Sure, why not?” Kame, unsurprisingly, declined,"

/\ for this, I thought people usually say that phrase when they're neutral and are all right to do the question or something. Like, "hey, do you wan't to go to the movies?" "Sure, why not?"

But either way this was awesome to the max. It had me laughing weirdly to myself, something which my family is already used to but still freaked out by, lol. ♥

OKAY MOVING ON TO THE NEXT FIC! :D

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ryunuka December 9 2009, 01:27:39 UTC
Sorry, that's supposed to be Ueda saying 'Sure, why not?' as a follow on to his previous statement, kame decliing is supposed to be separate, so I'd better change that, thanks for pointing it out, that's just my lack of undertsanding of my own grammar again >.<
Other than that I'm glad it made you laugh, for once I managed to write something that doesn't make people want to cry :P
Thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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sono_kiseki December 9 2009, 14:28:40 UTC
I GET IT NOW 8DDDDD

♥♥♥s for you, and I realised that my sparkles in my badass hearts have been eaten. D8

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dayenniez October 7 2009, 18:26:24 UTC
Oh no~ with this post,
I declare this is the 4th time I read this story,
& I never get boring.. XD

This was really good!!

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ryunuka October 20 2009, 12:25:14 UTC
4th time? Really!? O.O
Wow, I'm so glad you like it that much ^_^
Thank you lots for reading and commenting~!

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jindaluver October 12 2009, 11:49:38 UTC
i am soooo late to comment on this!!!i was so busy last week (>.<)
but before that...

*jumps around..jumpy jumpy* LOL XD
i'm so gonna accept this as my bday gift (although u might not planning to give it to me when u write it) *get bricked*

i knew it was u who wrote this!
ok,scratch that.i dun know it was u,but somehow i feel connected to this fic for some reason when i 1st read it at captain_u..

i really love that ctkt ep where tat-chan wore that pink pajamas,he looks so damn cute in there!
and i'm sure that ryo cannot resist tat-chan in that pink pajama too~~

anyway,thank you for sharing again *hugs*

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ryunuka October 20 2009, 12:27:03 UTC
I'm really glad you like it, and I'm sorry I missed your birthday! -facepalm-
-hugs back- ^_^

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jindaluver October 23 2009, 00:40:46 UTC
it's okay..you must be busy in ur RL..don't need to apologize for that.
i got busy too for the last 2 weeks,it was so tense.it's hard to get connected these days.

anyway, i wish we can talk soon ne~~

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fancyann1974 October 22 2010, 01:44:31 UTC
oh my this was so cute, sweet, adorable, and wonderful
thank you so much for sharing

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ryunuka October 23 2010, 20:53:44 UTC
Glad you liked it, it was fun to write, even if it didn't win :D
Thanks for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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