Comments | rysler: FIC: Death is That State (Navy NCIS) Ari/Ziva, Ziva/Jenny

rysler

FIC: Death is That State (Navy NCIS) Ari/Ziva, Ziva/Jenny

May 22, 2006 22:22

Title: Death is That State
Author: rysler
Rating: NC-17
Source: Navy NCIS
Pairing: Ziva/Ari (underage, non-consensual incest), Ziva/Jenny
Summary: Ziva backstory. AU. Spoilers for Kill Ari, Part 2.

( Death is That State )

ncis, incest

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rysler May 23 2006, 02:35:03 UTC

Thank you. You're a fast reader! I'm not a huge fan of NCIS, so I'm not sure I could recommend it, but Ziva's a great character. And beautiful.

rysler May 23 2006, 02:36:10 UTC

And your icon is great!

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rysler May 25 2006, 22:53:08 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you took a risk and read it even though it was a disturbing. It's an honor to hear from the woman who carries Ziva/Abby so well. :)

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rysler May 28 2006, 02:51:25 UTC

Well-written is key to my reading, too. Sad, happy, disturbing, pairing doesn't matter.

I love Ziva. So much. :)

brightbear December 11 2006, 14:22:54 UTC

I do like your Ziva. I especially loved that she learned to control Ari's behaviour. which probably made it hurt that much more when she realised that he was completely out of control.

rysler December 12 2006, 02:55:33 UTC

Thank you! I know this fic is very off the beaten path. But Ziva fascinates me.

And yes, I'm not sure that Ziva's ever really in control of anything. Except maybe Tony.

odette_river February 17 2008, 22:13:37 UTC

This was beautiful. I liked your take on everything--it seemed very true, especially how you portray Ziva and her past. Thanks for this!

rysler February 17 2008, 23:56:47 UTC

Thank you, very much. I'm glad to see someone stumbled across this. Ziva's quite captivating.

odette_river February 18 2008, 00:10:15 UTC

She certainly is. I found a rec from somone on ncisficfind. I was actually looking for Gibbs/Ziva, but I figured I'd give this one a try, and was hooked from the beginning.

rysler February 18 2008, 17:03:04 UTC

Oh wow, a rec. That's amazing. I had to run over and see.

I'm glad you gave it a shot and it was a worthy rec, then. Gibbs/Ziva, I could totally see.

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kidondarkangel December 20 2009, 04:56:50 UTC

Interesting. Completely against my views of Ari and Ziva, but you're a good writer so it was interesting. A note though Israelis speak Hebrew. Yiddish is a language spoken by Ashkenazi Jews. That is, Jews from Eastern Europe.

rysler December 22 2009, 02:01:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm touched you took a chance even though it wasn't what you were looking for.

I'm curious about your view of Ari and Ziva. Has a fic ever captured it? How do you see them?

I'm correcting the Yiddish thing...I didn't do quite enough research before I started this. It was a very in the moment fic.