My new family: a Heisei Kumi fanfic (16/16)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Keito/Shoon, with some side Ariyama, Chiitaro, onesidedYamada/Kamiki, onesided Hikato
Rating: R, for violence and dark themes
Genre: A little bit of everything, except smut. No smut, sorry~
Disclaimer: They all own each other. I own nothing~
Summary: Johnny Kitagawa head of the Kitagawa Yakuza Group, dies. Yes, he's dead

Comments

[mochiuchi]

Such a great ending XD although its a bit hanging up XP

Now I'll waiting for the spin-off~ AriYama, right? XD

[mochiuchi]

Eh, first? XD XD

[ryosukekoibito]

Thank you for commenting!

Yes, I currently think my weakest point in my writing is my endings; I will work hard to improve upon them.

Yay! I shall try and focus on it. Yes, Ariyama~

[geebabbiez]

YAY, I LOVE the ending. I was almost expecting you to kill off Shoon or Keito, but I'm so glad you didn't because I would have jumped off a cliff or something. xD
The ShoonxKeito rabu rabu scenes are sooo cute! x3 I squealed. xD
I'm totally looking forward to your future work! :D

[ryosukekoibito]

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. While I was writing it I did consider killing off Keito at the end, but my sister convinced me not to do it.
I love writing rabu rabu scenes, they're too much fun~

Yay! I'll be looking forward to your opinions of my future work! Please stick around!

[geebabbiez]

D:
Thank goodness for your sister. xD
After re-reading, I love the part where Hika's all "Why didn't you tell me you had a boyfriend? D: >.>" Poor Hika, no Engrish boy for you. xD

[ichiban_seiyaku]

Hi~ I've always been reading but never got to comment properly. With the ending, I thought I'd make up for all of that. (^_^)

This is one unique concept you got. I like the parallelism that Keito is still the newbie, awkward and unsure of everything. He has his weak sides but he actually worked on them and made it a goal to be stronger. I just love his characterization here. Plus, Yuto's his best friend. It doesn't get better than that. :D

With the last part of the previous chapter, I thought there would be a very big argument or conflict between Hikaru-Keito-Shoon. But I'm happy that part was skipped. Keito/Shoon ♥ You don't know how happy I am to read about that pairing. I miss them so much.

Woah~ It has been quite a long comment. I hope it didn't bore you. haha

Hope to read more from you. (^_^)

[ryosukekoibito]

Hi~ (^-^)/
It's unique. Nobody's ever said that about this fic. I was just writing something that I thought was fun to write. Keito always seemed like a person that would simply try his best and work hard no matter what. And of course, Okajima friendship is so sweet, I love them.
Yes, the Hika-Keito-Shoon conflict wasn't really present in the story. I didn't want to write another Yuto-Yamada-Daiki type situation. And Keito was unconcious. I love Keito/Shoon; I tried to find some fics with that pairing and when I couldn't I decided to write my own. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

You didn't bore me, you made me very happy with your comment! I hope to hear more feedback from you in the future!

[mayumi_san]

I AM LATE >.< stupid exams TT.TT

ANYWAY! I still love the fight scenes, they are awesome as heel. KAMIKI I HATE YOU FOREVER. /sobs

stop reminding Yama-chan of the rape! and Daiki you poor bb. T___T HAVE SEX WITH YAMA-CHAN ALREADY XDDD

CONGRATULATIONS KEITO!!!!! Even though you were in a coma and everything, congratulations and happy anniversary to you~\
I'm glad he really grew close to his new family now.

great ending!!!!! <3<3<3

[hstarfirej]

Hi, I'm new to live journal, but I just LOVED LOVED LOVED this story (Especially the Ariyama) it was awesome! The Yuto-Yamada relationship is very sad, but very sweet. The Ariyama relationship is portrayed in a way I never thought of before (I love over-protective Daiki). I can not wait for your Ariyama spin-off!!! I want to see more of Daiki the Bad-Ass Penguin!

[ryosukekoibito]

You're new? Welcome! I'm so happy you liked this story~ I had a lot of fun writing it, and I'm in the process of writing the Ariyama spinoff, it's taking me a long time, but I hope it'll be worth the wait! Ariyama FTW!