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ryosukekoibito

My new family: a Heisei Kumi fanfic (9/16)

Jul 20, 2011 09:58

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Keito-centric, with some side Ariyama, Chiitaro, Yamada/Kamiki
Rating: PG-13, for some scenes of violence ^-^
Genre: A little bit of everything, except smut. No smut, sorry~
Disclaimer: They all own each other. I own nothing~
Summary: Johnny Kitagawa head of the Kitagawa Yakuza Group, dies. Yes, he's dead. Now, Okamoto ( Read more... )

multi-chap: my new family

Comments 4

sugarwhales July 20 2011, 15:26:34 UTC

WTF HAPPENED TO RYOSUKE OH GOD.

I mean, I was all tensed and frustrated over the Yuto vs Daiki thing (which Daiki should rightfully win) and then suddenly YAMADA RYOSUKE SCREAMS AND HE HOLDS HIS KATANA AND I WAS LIKE, 'WTF DID SOMEONE SECRETLY STAB HIM IN THE BACK OMG WHAT?'

Then Daiki approaches him and he backs away and I'm like 'O_O WHY?'

Then he actually runs off and I'm like, 'O________o WHAT ARE YOU DOING YAMADA?'

and then why do I not see a sentence like, "Daiki goes after him to console him" or something?!

Okay yeah biased side rant ends here. I can't wait to see why he acted so weirdly like that. And I can't believe Yuto actually went ahead with his challenge.. it's as if it's Keito's fault for pushing him forward.. is it omg

AND THE NECKLACE? Yuto why'd you break it?! (glares)

but ily Yuto anyway please don't hate me

And heroic Keito is forever adorable. <3 And the way Hikaru is always by his side.. AWWWWWWW. How sweet. I want to give Hika a hug.

Update? :3

ryosukekoibito July 20 2011, 16:11:53 UTC

Oh my goodness your comment is so long, when I saw it my eyes got big, like this:
O.O...

Yamada, poor thing. His first love/best friend and his boyfriend are beating each other up over him. Wouldn't that be awful? I'd hate to have to watch that.

He needs some time to think things over, ne? He doesn't want to be consoled, he wants to be alone.

Aww! Don't blame Keito for the fight. He's just being a good friend.

I love Yuto too. He's wonderful.

I love Hikaru and Keito in this chapter, myself. Hika is adorable.

thank you for your comment. ^.^

mayumi_san July 20 2011, 16:06:48 UTC

I was reading with bated breath when it came to Yuto and Daiki's fight... I was cringing, as I was the one being beaten up O.o

I can't believe that Yuto actually went ahead with it OMG WHAAAAT

And the necklace, Yuto, whyyyy? You're destroying my Ariyama but you guys should really stop hurting each other >.<

Okay I don't understand Yamada either. WHY DID HE LEAVEEEE T.T what happens to my OTP now?!

INOO DO SOMETHING LOLOL /like attempt to steal Daiki so that Yamada will do something too XD

And Hikaru and Keito are a married couple. Like SERIOUSLY. they just need a ring to complete it, with the way Hikaru is hanging around and feedin Keito and all that jazz XD. <3333333

poor Keito :( I'd hate to look like you, but come on, it's L! L is bloody brilliant.

Please update soon! You left us with a cliffhanger and that should not doooooo~

/give you strawberries <3

ryosukekoibito July 20 2011, 16:26:01 UTC

Yup, Yuto decided to fight. Crazy, huh?

Yamada needs some time to himself, to think things through. The poor boy, imagine from his point of view. That woulda been a shock.

Hikaru and Keito are cute. I love their relationship.

Yes! I was worried about making an anime reference, but I figured that if people were confused then they could google 'L' and find a picture of him pretty easily.

*grins happily* I'll update; you know I will. In the meantime I'm working on the Ariyama multichap I promised. I hopefully will be able to write today \(6.^)