[Super Junior] [CinHae] Paper Feelings

[ryoses]

Title: Paper Feelings
Pairing: Heechul/Donghae
Rating: G
Summary: Wherein Heechul muses and I pun upon Donghae's name.
A/N: For my crackdealer k0uryuu. ♥ To tide her over until I finish that other fic I promised her. And to distract her from college applications.

Comments

[pyro_o]

omg first?

[pyro_o]

oh god. ouchie. ;____;

but omg CINHAE and sucha lovely STORYY.

and no more words to saaaaaay

:x

[ryoses]

LOL thank you. ♥

[pyro_o]

:DDD

[quixoxotic]

that was really nicely written ^______^

[ryoses]

Thank you!

[bunengshuode]

Live fast, love hard, die young.

That is just so awesomely Princess and such a shot to the heart line to start with.

and a worn silver bracelet thrown into the back of a shoebox

and this is a beaaaaautiful image.

"What colour I should dye my hair next," he says after a beat. "Maybe I should go for blue."

SPORFLE. BLUE PRINCESS. OMG. *DEAD*

settling himself into the space between Heechul's feet and the edge of the couch.

I love this. Idek. It's just such a nice description and it feels so fitting, like puzzle pieces clicking together.

Their hands drift over pink paisley fabric -- I really should buy a new couch -- and intertwine, the action subconscious and familiar. Heechul doesn't give it a second thought.

♥ GAH. *heart breaks for them* ;_;

his voice a whisper that falls like autumn leaves. Heechul wonders if it would crack like autumn leaves if he pushed hard enough, if it would burn -- paper feelings and paper memories -- and send smoke up into the sky.I love this image you have of fire going throughout the fic, and

[ryoses]

*FLAILS* I am so glad you like it. ♥ And you are so amazing because you just got everything I was trying to do and maybe a few things that I didn't realize I was doing, but omg.

SPORFLE. BLUE PRINCESS. OMG. *DEAD*

CAN'T YOU JUST IMAGINE THAT? AHAHA. It would hilarious if he actually dyed his hair blue and I could just be like "HAY GUYZ I TOTALLY CALLED IT."

I love how your Heechul is losing himself in Hae, instead of the other way around, and I love how your Hae is the one who is so steady but also just so fluid that Heechul gets wrapped up in him

Hee. I was originally going to go with Donghae as earth or somesuch, but then I realized it would work better as ocean. AND I COULD PUN UPON DONGHAE'S NAME AT THE SAME TIME. 8D

I love you. ♥ *flails at you again*

[bunengshuode]

♥ ILU. YOU ARE JUST TOO WONDERFUL FOR ME.

..........that would just be HILARIOUS. I'd just die. DIE. XD. He dyed it orange, so WHO KNOWS?! ♥

Hae as ocean is such a beautiful image. I just. *melts* Gah. Water imagery always kills me.

♥ MARRY ME. *clings*

[ryoses]

NEVER. YOU ARE MORE WONDERFUL, WHICH IS WHY YOU GET SPOILED WITH FIC. ♥

I should write him a letter. "Dear Princess Cinderella Heechul, plz dye your hair blue and dedicate it to me and a girl named Kou. And Donghae, if you want. ;D" Except he'd probably read it and go "wtmfh" and never look at it again. :( Oh well.

Whenever I think of Hae now, I always think of him sitting at a beach. *falls* But it is a very pretty mental image and there can be subsequent images of wet!Hae, so it's okay. \:D/

YES. I WILL. I DO. LET'S ELOPE. ♥

[taylormercury]

You do my OTP justice. Not enough wonderful fics get written about these two, and I love them so much.

And this was wonderful! I love the way you wrote it, your description and your imagery was beautiful, I loved the ongoing theme of fire and burning, and that 'pun' on Donghae's name, that fit in so nicely at the end, changing the theme to the ocean like that. You did it all in a way that wasn't cliched or anything, and it came out lovely.

Mmm, I love reading good CinHae fics ♥

[ryoses]

I'm glad you like it! ♥

[candymint]

THAT WAS LOVELY
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[ryoses]

Thank you!