Comments | ryokojesse: drabble-turned-oneshot

ryokojesse

Sep 21, 2008 22:41

Title: The Bottom
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura
Word Count: 859
Rating/Warning: PG-13/character death, spoiler
Prompt 42/100: Still

( My moon, my man / So changeable and / Such a lovable lamb to me... )

Comments 4

crazyoverbishie September 23 2008, 11:00:57 UTC

aaaccckkk...sooo sad.... T____________T

pls do write more...ill be waiting for another great pieces from you...^^

ryokojesse September 23 2008, 11:28:22 UTC

thank you!

rabid_fangrrl September 25 2008, 15:26:21 UTC

Wow!
I liked it. I was sparce and haiku-like.
And brutal!
There's a lot of emotion packed into this little piece. Well done.

ryokojesse September 25 2008, 22:19:27 UTC

Thank you! I was afraid its brutality would scare off readers, so I'm glad that's not the case here.