[fic] For Thine is the Kingdom (3/4, NC17, for vikkir)

[rynne]

Why do I have no porn icon? I'll have to go find one, though not tonight, as I've got blasted morning classes tomorrow and need to go to bed after I post this if I want to be functional. Also, the last chapter of this is finished and has been betad, but there are several revisions I need to make, so you'll get it in a few days

Comments

[vikkir]

Uh.... yeah... can't quite think straight to respond yet....

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Okay, I think I've beaten my hormones back enough to respond. That was guh. And I mean guh in a good way. I love how damn possessive this Vader is, and Luke, bless him, is so innocent - his nervous anticipation is infectious. The 'dubious consent' thing worked really well - but, eh, that is my own particular kink so you hit the right buttons there. All in all - guh.

Oh, yeah, and -

Finally, he said, "No matter. It will be cramped, but it can be done here. In fact," he continued, looking around, "it is probably for the best, anyway."

Snerk. Can't help but wonder what other romantic spot Vader had in mind.

[jedibix783]

Hehehehehehe. I agree. What romantic spot did Vader have in mind, rynne?

[rynne]

...Dunno. *g* Not particularly romantic, but I was just thinking the common room, though only 'cause it has more space. Not that it matters, like Vader said. :p

[rynne]

Whoo, you liked it! *is relieved* I'm really glad. :D

Can't help but wonder what other romantic spot Vader had in mind.

:p I was thinking the main room 'cause there's more space, but like Vader mentioned, it didn't really matter, so eh. *g*

Btw, the last chapter has been revised and is with my beta again. Hopefully it'll be up soon.

[vasher]

Dear God...eep

My mind is running in circles and imploding at the melting heat of this.

Must come back later when coherent. This should really be listed as V/L...XD

[rynne]

Thanks! *blushes* I'm glad you liked it.

This should really be listed as V/L...XD

Despite having gotten my start in anime/video game fandoms, I never particularly cared about the order the names were listed in. I know it's a pretty common thing for the more dominant to be listed first, but that never mattered to me. :p

[sansenmage]

Silly Fangirl types: oh, u soooo teh ebil!

Serious Fangirl types: I've never read Force sex like that! Everyone makes Vader so physically dominating during teh sex, er, the act, instead of making it into Force sensuality like you have. As for Luke, well he always wanted to know his father, and now he really, really does. Egads? Yeah, edgad because there's only one installment to go...

[rynne]

I've never read Force sex like that!

:p I've never read Force sex at all, so I don't know how it's normally done. And I've never read Vader having sex either, so didn't know how that's normally done either. But I'm glad you liked it! *g*

As for Luke, well he always wanted to know his father, and now he really, really does.

*dead* Just... *dead* XD

[erboo]

*thud*

I'm lost for words.

I keep remembering Vader's "What happened to going along for the ride?" and feeling faint. Yes, indeedy, Luke had a lovely ride. Vader is so...all-consuming. Luke is spoiled now; he'll never have sex with anyone else that will be anything close to this. He'll just want to stay with Vader and ride and ride and ride....

Yay for another chapter, but...only one more?

[rynne]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) And hee, all-consuming's a good word for Vader, really. But you'll have to wait and see what happens, and yes, there's only one chapter left. :p

[rynne]

Hey, I warned you...but I was also reading (and writing *g*) smut when I was underage, so. :p

Glad you liked it, though! :)