Comments | rynne: [fic] Feet on the Ground (Star Wars, PG-13, prologue)

rynne

[fic] Feet on the Ground (Star Wars, PG-13, prologue)

Dec 06, 2005 20:09

I'm finally posting this fic; I'm so excited! :D I've worked on it for months, and now I'm finally beginning to get it back from my betas, so I can start posting! Anyway, here we go.

Title: Feet on the Ground
Author: Rynne
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU. Luke Skywalker has grown up his father's apprentice, and can't imagine anything ( Read more... )

fic: star wars, rating: pg-13, fanfic, luke skywalker, star wars, darth vader, fandom

Comments 4

mlgm December 7 2005, 19:16:49 UTC

Fabulous start, just having Luke around is beginning to change Vader in ways Vader just isn't seeing.

But the idea of Palps anywhere near the innocent blonde, blue-eyed moppet is just wrong

rynne December 8 2005, 07:22:20 UTC

But the idea of Palps anywhere near the innocent blonde, blue-eyed moppet is just wrong

I rather agree, but poor Luke...he's going to see much, much more of Palpatine than he wants before I'm done with him. :p

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the beginning. :)

many_miles_away December 8 2005, 20:38:09 UTC

Only one person has commented so far?! Nah, that won't do.

Of course I won't go into detail because I so not belong to the Star Wars fandom, I haven't even seen the last one, and even though I love the three episodes with Han Solo, my knowledge of the specifics is, to say the least vague. But what the hell!, I thought this morning, if it's fic written by Rynne, it must be worth reading.

I wasn't proven wrong. *grins* I loved the style, even though it sounded weirdly off for a Star Wars fiction (I think I expected a...hm, colder style, if you know what I mean), but on the other hand, it was less intimidating for me, it didn't feel like stepping into this giant machine of fanfiction. I also loved how you showed Vador's (or rather, Anakin's) defiance through almost invisible changes of attitude.

Count me in for chapter two! ♥

rynne December 9 2005, 12:05:20 UTC

Ahaha. Unfortunately, there will be no Han Solo until the sequel to this fic, but I'm glad you decided to read! <3

And about the style...I don't think fandoms themselves really have styles, so much as the authors, and while I think mine chills a bit in the later chapters, I don't think I could write a "machine of fanfiction". I do try not to be intimidating!

Thank you again for reviewing; I'm glad you liked it, and that you'll be around for more. :)