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Idol Week 6: Solvitur Ambulando

Nov 14, 2019 18:04

Gabe McAdams and the Salisbury Witch

A man in a loud green checked suit and matching bowler had walked merrily up the road, swinging his carpet bag in time with the tune he was humming to himself. He was in a fantastic mood. A brand new town lay before him...well, not brand new; Salisbury had been around for over a century, but he hadn't been ( Read more... )

lj idol s11, fractured fairy tales

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roina_arwen November 17 2019, 21:31:07 UTC
Nifty twist to the Jack and the Beanstalk tale!

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ryl November 17 2019, 22:47:58 UTC
Thanks!

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pixiebelle November 17 2019, 22:47:40 UTC
This was such a fun read :)

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ryl November 17 2019, 22:48:30 UTC
Gabe's a fun guy. There may be more of his tale if the muse wills it.

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static_abyss November 18 2019, 03:29:29 UTC
Is this the same salesman from your earlier entry? Because if so, I had a marvelous time reading his perspective and if it wasn't, it fits in very nicely.

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ryl November 18 2019, 11:41:49 UTC
Yes, it is. I finally figured out his name and why he wanted a cow.

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marlawentmad November 18 2019, 19:47:06 UTC
I love all the woven pieces of this! The slap is such a great twist.

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ryl November 18 2019, 23:57:20 UTC
Thanks!

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murielle November 18 2019, 20:17:02 UTC
Poor Gabe! And he's such an affable fellow. Well as long as you don't buy anything from him. ;-)

Lovely take on the prompt and the fairy tale.

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ryl November 18 2019, 23:56:53 UTC
He's a charmer, all right. Trouble is, he knows it.

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