Fic: Unity (4/?)

[ryeloza]

Title: Unity (4/?)
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Word Count: 2300 (this part)
Rating: Very light R
Setting: Post-Smallest Park
Summary: Loosely, this is series of moments that make up Leslie’s ideas for the unity quilt.  Somewhere along the way it’s morphed into a lot more.
A/n: So this finally happened.  Thank you to everyone who has been sticking with me

Comments

[ryeloza]

Wow--thank you! I was so worried about this chapter (I wasn't sure omitting dialogue would work), so this comment means a lot to me. I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

[bowlsohard]

Wow this is beautifully written. Wow.

<3

[ryeloza]

Thank you!

[c00kie]

I came back to read this again to find my review was never posted. Thanks LJ.

So, I've never really been satisfied with Smallest Park fics, until now. There's a certain quiet beauty about this piece that I really love. I'm really looking forward to the next installment.

[ryeloza]

Ugh, I hate when lj eats comments.

Thank you for commenting again, though! I'm glad you liked it!

[courtknees1]

Forgive me this brief review, as I'm very sleepy, but this was just wonderful (as is everything you do), and it has given me a lot of lovely Smallest Park feels to drift through my head and hopefully into my dreams. I love the places you took us within Leslie's mind, all the while staying anchored in that lovely quiet cosy bed. Just lovely.

[ryeloza]

This was a lovely thing to see when I rolled into work this morning. Thank you so much!

[ashisfriendly]

I was up way too late reading this and couldn't form coherent thoughts. i still can't, but I can try a bit harder now.

This is great, obviously, because I've said it already. However, I think you need to be told how amazing and inspiring your prose is, your attention to detail, you description of emotions, your ability to say so much in so little. It's wonderful. It makes me feel so many things and I just read a 400 page published novel that made me feel only angry because it was so bad it didn't stir up anything in me. Unlike how you write. You beautiful centaur goddess.

All the dad stuff is great, wonderful, slices of Leslie's life that we don't get to see and you do it so great and in character that fuck it it should just be canon. Some one call Mike Schur.

You win, you are wonderful, you must write everything.

[ryeloza]

Ashley, I can't even...Your comments just make me feel all of the feelings and it's overwhelming. Thank you!! You are too kind to me.