Sleep

Feb 27, 2007 22:12


I woke up from my long slumber a moment ago. When I heard the sound of my hollow heart bellowing with the wind, falling for anything.

Looking for direction; I've found myself, found my flaws, found my greatness. Waking up from my dreamless sleep I found proof of sleep-walking. I'd stubbed my toe on complacency, bruised these ribs with pride and fell ( Read more... )

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spit_venom March 2 2007, 04:41:28 UTC
Gosh, I love this. This is just so deep and so open. I tried to pick one line I loved the best, but I couldn't. The whole thing screams realness. Very well written, my friend.

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ryandl March 9 2007, 13:37:31 UTC
thank you. I wanted to be more honest. But I'm not sure I'm ready. I'm glad you liked it.

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msu_insomniac March 7 2007, 16:18:20 UTC
This is soooo beautiful, Ryan :)

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ryandl March 9 2007, 13:38:11 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry for the late response. My computer's been on the fritz.

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