(fic) User is Online

[evraealtana]

Title: User is Online
Author: Altana
Characters/pairings: Esposito/Ryan
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 for language, sex, and mild alcohol consumption
Summary:  Esposito has a new obsession.
Spoilers: None, of which I'm aware...basic stuff about Heat Wave.
Word Count: 4,514
Author's Note: Haha, very late entry =P sorry about that.  Had it written for a while but

Comments

[marie16fh]

Ah, you killed me with this one :D
How awesome wouldn't it be if the real people saw this and acted on it? *dreaming happily*

Loved it, funny and damn sexy xx

[evraealtana]

Thank you!!

I read an article somewhere about "Seamus [Dever] reading his first Ryan/Esposito slash fic" and thought, well geez, why couldn't Ryan and Esposito read fics about their fictional self? I'm glad it turned out okay! Thank you for commenting!

[marie16fh]

he's done that? :o Would does things like that just sneak around me? -.-'

[aliceinked]

ooooooo.... *iz dead*........ :D

[evraealtana]

I hope that's a good "dead"! =P I don't usually like killing my readers...unless I'm killing them with happiness...or fangirl-squeal-scream-thing-overload...

[aliceinked]

it was more *squee* the *dead* type thing but i'm ok now! that was really good!!! :D

[evraealtana]

Ah yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it =] Thank you for reading & commenting ^^

[barneygood]

Hah! My favourite characters-read-fanfic story I've read. Very entertaining. :)

[evraealtana]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it *whew*

[black_sluggard]

Favorite line:
"What was that list again? Go, see, kiss, bang him into the mattress, commit suicide? Go, panic, have a heart attack, die on his carpet?"

I love fanfic-fics. Love 'em to death.

[evraealtana]

OMG YAY! That was my favorite line too! But my beta didn't say anything about it, so I thought maybe it didn't come off like I had intended...

Or maybe she was just too busy making sure the rest of it didn't sucl ;)

[michygeary]

DAMN this was smoking hot and funny to boot. When Esposito started back and forth commenting with that author, I was like "Please be Castle. NO WAIT. PLEASE BE RYAN." You did not disappoint. XD

I love how, out of all those fics, Esposito picked at random the one written by Ryan. They're just that in sync. (Or did Ryan write them all? Naw, I'm sure there are TONS of Raley/Ochoa shippers in that canon.)

[evraealtana]

HAHAHA!! I didn't think about Ryan writing them all!!!

Yes, it seems Ryan and Esposito have twin brains after all...or maybe it's just that Ryan knows his partner (*ahem* "partner") well enough to know what he likes ;) Esposito did read the other fics, but the one that really made his blood pound...