I liked the last paragraph about those fireflies. And I know that this entry probably isn't worthy of a comment about the writing or structure but the final paragraph hit home. You have this divine skill of painting a picture for your audience to lap up, with whatever you write and I've been too chicken to say so before. Like many others after me may say, I hope you're ok.
I used to love to catch fireflies or butterflies when I was a child, and I used to always get that feeling of having caught the most beautiful thing ever, and with a broken heart having to release it, because if I didn't I knew I'd bring upon their demise.
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how very deja vu of my evening. and i'm still not.
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