Sins of the Family ch.II: The Eyes of a Child

[ryals_shoal]

Title: Sins of the Family
Series: Naruto
Rating: PG-13 (for violence)
Category: Adventure/Suspense/Romance
Synopsis: A direct attempt on Iruka’s life forces him to flee from Konoha with Kakashi as a reluctant bodyguard. Their only hope lies in uncovering the buried secrets of Iruka’s family, and they must do so before the assassin succeeds in his

Comments

[lucime]

Love this! quite the ironic plot device that Iruka was doing a family assignment that week ;p

Please keep posting, I like your writing.

[ryals_shoal]

Thank you! I'm hoping that this plot device would fit in with the rest of the story.

btw, I absolutely adore your Sophie icon!

[lucime]

Glad you like it! It's my pretty-things icon. :) I have it saved as being by razzberridust, but I've not having any luck finding the page today. I really ought to keep better track of the icon communities I've been wandering through...

Is that Lina Inverse in your icon?

[ryals_shoal]

Why yes it is! (and here's my Xelloss one too, hooray for Slayers!) I'm a total 'tard for this anime, as well as Naruto! You're more than welcome to use any of my icons if you'd like! :3

[y_sanada]

Wow a second chapter already!! I'm glad that Kakashi & Iruka are special to you and that this story festered in the back of your head until you were compelled to write it. The first 2 chapters have laid out a very intriguing tale. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to your updates.

[ryals_shoal]

Thank you so much for your nice comment! :) I hope that the next chapters won't fail to dissapoint!

[wickedly_evil]

I'm so happy to see a second chapter so soon. It's definitely getting exciting. Looking forward to the next installment.

[bgreenwivy]

Oohhh the plot thickens. Those bastards took over a little kid.

[salmastryon]

oooo Dramatic tension.

I'm already dying for the nest part. :D

[salmastryon]

next part that is. :P