Twinning the Hatchet rewrite, chapter 3

[ryagelle]

How long ago did I say this just needed tweaking before it would be ready to post? ^^'
Still not tooooootally happy with it, but i feel i need to move on to the next chapter before this one eats my head.

Title: Twinning the Hatchet redux, Chapter 3
Author: ryagelle
Rating: This part PG-13, overall fic rating NC-17
Characters: Ratchet, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker

Comments

[renegadewriter8]

T.T Poor Ratch, it really does hit him hard seeing the twins hurting themselves over and over again, good thing Sides is starting to notice. Can't wait for more!

[velvet_infinity]

YAY! MOAR!

I'm sad to say I was getting extremely impatient for this, but I understand that life has ways of throwing us lemons out of nowhere. So I shall attempt to wait patiently for more... (is already failing)

[ffdemon]

Good as always. ;)

I really like to see Ratchet and Sides realisations. And some how I just know it would be more painful knowing what is comming for them.

[playswithworms]

Sideswipe is finally getting a clue! Not enough clue, of course, but it's a start ^^