Twinning the Hatchet rewrite, chapter 2

[ryagelle]

Wow, did anyone get the license plate of that Mack truck? I think it was RL-something-something... @_@
In any case, I've finally got the chance to get online for purposes other than school, so I'm going to make the most of it by posting the next chapter of the Twinning the Hatchet rewrite. ^_^ (playswithworms, I am so very epic glad you pointed out the twins_x_ratch comm to

Comments

[playswithworms]

:DDDDDDDDDDDD *happily takes all the credit* Well, you get some of the credit, too, since you actually did the writing :P

Gah! Sideswipe! You complete and utter afthead! *thwops him soundly about the helm* Talk about devious, sheesh. Glad to see Sunny, at least, has an idea of the repercussions. Who would have guessed him for the sensible one?

[ryagelle]

XDDDDD Hey, credit where credit's due, yeah? ^__^

And Sideswipe is totally an aft. He's completely contrite about it now, but the whole bet was a jerk idea of epic proportions. ^^;

[ffdemon]

I have to say I'm a bit surprise to see you rewrite this, but I won't complain.

The first version of this fic have make me fall madly in love with this pairing. XD

I like the new aspect here, Like Sides been so a aft about this and Sunny been the one thin about the possible repercussion. Can't wait to see how this one will go.

Wonderful work

[ryagelle]

Thank you! The first fic was written hurriedly, with a desperate rush to just get the story down. A lot of the nuance was sacrificed for that, and I wanted to correct it.

Sideswipe was always an aft for pursuing the bet in the first place, it's just that now we see a little more of his thought process and emotions. He completely and totally did not expect for this to end up mattering to him at all. (Oh Sides, how wrong you are.) ^_^

Love This!!!

[dementiaskiss]

I have to tell you, I was a little worried at first, sometimes re-writes can be bad, and I fell in love with the original on FF.net. But this re-write, I'm truly enjoying. I like getting a little exta peek into the Twins behavior. And I think that while Sides might have discovered his feelings for Ratchet later, Sunny ALREADY had feelings for him-- even if he wouldn't admit it.

And, I have to admit, I'm looking forward to the smut, LOL. I always liked the intensity between Ratchet and Suuny when they were alone in the first version, and I'm interested to see how that translates into sticky. Cause I like sticky, lol. I'm really looking forward to the next update =)

[velvet_infinity]

D:

*Throws wrench at Sideswipe's head*

Evil Siders!!

Soooo.... an estimation on when we may have more??

[ryagelle]

*helps throw wrenches at Sideswipe* Bad Sides, bad!

Hopefully I can find time to post again before too much longer...I've already gotten rough drafts up to halfway through chapter 5 completed, they just need to be tweaked, and for me to scrounge up enough time to actually get them polished and posted ^_^

[velvet_infinity]

i shall wait impatiently XD

[renegadewriter8]

Wow I didn't know you were rewriting this! No wonder there were parts i didn't remember XD LOL Though I think it was awesome the first time (and this fic made me love this paring), this is also great! I love how sideswipe is being a total aft! Sunny seems to be more concerned for Ratchet and I love that! Can not WAIT to see more!! Great job!

[ryagelle]

Thank you! Sideswipe should never have taken that bet if he'd wanted to avoid being an aft (which he doesn't, at this point, though he'll regret it later). ^_^

[ex_naggingf]

I'm really enjoying the rewrite...Sides is kind of a jerk ^_^

[ryagelle]

Hee, thanks! XD And yeah, Sides is definitely a jerk at this point, and it'll take him a bit to realize that he's maybe getting in a little deeper than he intends ^_^