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FIC: "New York", Jack McCoy/Ed Green

Jan 27, 2006 12:30

Title: New York
Author: hawkeyecat
Fandom: Law & Order: The Original Series
Medium: Television
Genre: Slash
Pairing: Jack McCoy/Ed Green
Theme: M is for Mars: Roman god of war and agriculture; father of Romulus and Remus.
Community: alphabetasoup
Word Count: 600
Rating: Probably teen.
Disclaimer: Um, no.
Author's Notes: This prompt was chosen by ladyabbey, and oh man, it’s ( Read more... )

alphabetasoup: law & order: tos, author's favorite, jack mccoy/ed green, jack mccoy, law & order: tos, ed green

Comments 9

leaper182 January 27 2006, 20:38:41 UTC

Awwwwwwww. *snuggles NYC*

A very good fic, imho. And yay! You were able to write it out and everything. Congrats!

*hug*

rwryter January 27 2006, 20:41:56 UTC

Thank you.

Yeah, I got it written--at 0230.

leaper182 January 27 2006, 20:58:47 UTC

Your muses are all scary nightowls.

*cuddle*

kirylyn January 27 2006, 23:27:04 UTC

ooh, very nice, I'm already teared up due to the anniversary of the astronaut deaths and thoughts of 9/11 is just overload.

but still very good. I might have to dig thru archives to see if anyone posted fic reacting to that fateful day

rwryter January 27 2006, 23:31:12 UTC

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you thought it was good.

officerjudy January 28 2006, 01:33:59 UTC

Very powerful, and well-written. I like the Jeter analogy, and the last line is especially good.

Nice job! : )

rwryter January 28 2006, 01:41:12 UTC

The Jeter analogy was rather random. It's one of those things that comes up at about, oh, 0300.

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

ladyabbey January 30 2006, 07:11:35 UTC

Hm...I don't remember choosing this prompt. Well, maybe I do--was it part of a meme?

That aside, this is such a great piece. All of it rings true, but two things especially.

I can remember thinking something like the opening line while watching the news coverage of the towers collapsing over and over again. It was hard to feel anything but helpless that day.

The last bit, where Jack and Ed discover that the other is unhurt...they'll definitely be holding each other a little tighter after this.

Thank you for such a wonderful piece.

rwryter January 30 2006, 07:41:26 UTC

Do you remember the post I did, asking for a letter and number? You chose M1, I believe.

I know how I felt that day--I was at school, and had a bloody English test that my teacher refused to delay. I can't imagine how it must have felt to be in New York when it happened.

Oh, I'm sure they will. They're so incredibly relieved, Jack especially.

Thank you for reading, and for your kind words.