Awesome last line. And it's so Hermione to learn these things from a book!
“You look amazing, by the way,” he whispered when they parted. “And taste amazing. And feel amazing. And are amazing.” Finally! Ah, if only Ron had gone with Hermione to Slughorn's party...
I liked this a lot, it was well written and portrayed the relationship between the two well. Yay! :)
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“Ginny taught you?” He voice came out like an astonished gurgle. “You’ve been snogging my sister?”
i absolutely loved how you incorporated that into the story. not that i'ma ginny/hermione shipper or anything. ; ) bravo. *claps*.
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*hugs your Ron so tight*
That was lovely.
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Great job.
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“You look amazing, by the way,” he whispered when they parted. “And taste amazing. And feel amazing. And are amazing.” Finally! Ah, if only Ron had gone with Hermione to Slughorn's party...
I liked this a lot, it was well written and portrayed the relationship between the two well. Yay! :)
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beautiful. i would have absolutely died if this was how the book had gone.
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