FIC: Everything Has Gone Awry, R/Hr PG13

[reposoir]

Title: Everything Has Gone Awry
Author: Ociwen
Challenge: #5 HBP: What happened during Hermione's visits with poisoned Ron in the hospital wing?
Word Count: 1100
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: JKR owns all, not me.
Summary: Hermione visits Ron in the Hospital Wing.
Author's Notes: Thank you koneko_meow for the fabu and fast beta!

Comments

[jaswanson]

I'm running around catching up on submissions and I'm falling all over myself because of this story, now. :) I don't know about everyone else, but I adore hussy!Hermione. At least, that's how I think of her when she is occasionally naughty or slightly scandalous. Also, I am particularly fond of repetition as a literary device, so I appreciate the phrase "everything has gone awry." Nice follow-through on that.

I also really like this: ...her tears trapped in her eyes like her voice in her throat when Madam Pomfrey says “He’s sleeping still, dear.”

Oh, and you were right. We do have a similar tone to our stories. :) At the risk of sounding a bit of a narcisist, I'm friending you because I'd like to read more of your work.

Thanks for posting! Best of luck.

[reposoir]

*grins*

Thank you so much!

[gobsmackit]

The fact that you've written R/Hr makes me SO happy (despite this icon, :p). I've missed your fic - your awesome, gritty details (how gross hospital!Ron is) especially. Love your Hermione, and her reaction to excited!Ron. I love how they sort of talked it out, responding to it, it seemed very in character! Ron's “I- I didn’t mind,” he says, very quiet. made me so damned happy. :D

[reposoir]

*squees*

Thank you so much, Ahsley! *squees some more*

[bluishorbs]

“If I told you I was wearing a thong, would you wake up?”

LOL, loved it. :D

[reposoir]

Thank you! :D