Fic Request Fulfilled for forgetablelove

[lissomelle]

Title: Catch My Fall
Author: lire_casander
Beta: Kirstin (confiteor_3)
Rating: NC - 17
Word count: 4784
Summary: Fifteen years after the final battle, Hermione remembers what really happened that last Valentine's Day.
Warnings: Angst, character death, UST, dark themes.
Disclaimer: I do not own in any form or shape these characters, JK Rowling does. Just playing with them

Comments

[rwhgreply]

I've always wanted someone to tell me those things instead of a simple "I love it!" so it's not too critical.

Well, the Hermione here is extremely hurt. She can't stand thinking about what happened, let alone actually seeing it - so I guess she didn't allow it, she just couldn't stop them from seeing it because she was too afraid of watching it all over again. But maybe that wasn't exactly the best way to say so.

Thanks for stopping here to comment!

[manda_lalala]

This story was so sad. It is terrible to think of them not celebrating Voldemort's death. I also agree with Strigoia that it made me a little uncomfortable thinking of all those teenagers watching Ron and Hermione make love. I feel it was a nice part of the story though, so maybe you could make it a memory Hermione has or something that wasn't in the pensive. Just a thought. Overall I thought it was a great story though. The plot was very well developed.

[rwhgreply]

I think she just couldn't celebrate because it wasn't a happy day for her =(

As I've said before, I love these comments, they make me feel like I can improve my writing. Thank you! I've been thinking about rewriting some scenes, do a bit of editing, sometime in a near future. I'll be sure to let you know once it's posted.

[midnight_birth]

First of all, I would like to tell you that I think this is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Period. If not the best. And that impresses me beyond all belief because I rarely find stories that I like that much.

I sobbed like a little baby through most of it. It probably didn't help that I was reading it to some extremely depressing music, but your words managed to reached into my heart and literally unfreeze it. This story was brilliant. I don't know where to start.

First of all, the way you wrote the characters. I must take my hats off to you because they were so real. A lot of authors (including JKR, at times), completely forget that while they are brave and strong and self-sacrificial, they are children. Ones who are scared, worried, and really just terrified of everything to come. Even Harry. He may have been through a lot and be much older than his age, but he is still scared. Nobody at his age (or ever, really) can truly make peace with such sure impending doom

[lire_casander]

First of all, I'm sorry to have taken so much time in replying.

Then, wow! Thanks for such a great review! I think it's the longest I've ever received. What can I say? You've made me cry with your interpretation of the fic. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

[luvscharlie]

I liked the idea behind the story (even if Malfoy was included), and I like smut scenes more than most, but the smut in front of the teenagers was a little squicky for me. It just didn't seem very Hermione-like to me. Then, there's dead Ron, which breaks my heart.

[lire_casander]

First of all, I'm sorry to have taken so much time in replying...

Thanks for commenting. I think the issues this story deals with are abit off for the characters, but that's the way it turned out to be. It's not my favourite fic from my own, but I really appreciate your words, as they help me to improve my writing.

[kou_shun_u]

and she should them all that to her students?
oh and wasnt part of it a memory within a memory so how did that work?
but nakedness? i didnt see it earler..nor the bed for that matter...till the last lines and well her class got to see her as such?