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Want - Fantasize

Jul 14, 2011 09:32

Title : Fantasize
Author : Russian Torque
Team/Pairing : Chicago Blackhawks - Toews/Kane
Words : 548

Overall Rating/Warning : NC-17 - m/m explicit

( He knows in his heart that what he feels for Johnny isn't just admiration. )

pairing : j.toews / p.kane, team : chicago blackhawks, fandom : hockey, story : 100hawks, player : patrick kane, player : jonathan toews, rating : nc-17

Comments 8

csandiegooo July 14 2011, 14:13:36 UTC

This was so intense/hot! I loved how, at the end, you brought it back to a serious, slightly melancholy note about Pat's longing. Thank you for writing! :)

Side note: I noticed your icon and I love it! I am such a fan of The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo movies. The original versions with Noomi Rapace were so incredible, I am kind of worried the American version will ruin it :(

russiantorque July 14 2011, 15:36:47 UTC

Thank you for reading!
I'm kind of a freak about happy endings, I'd rather write unhappy ones, lol.

They were incredible!! I love them all. Have you read the books??
I'm not too worried about the movie, but that's just because Daniel Craig is in it and I like the eye candy, lol. From the looks of the previews, they kept it pretty close and it looks intriguing.

csandiegooo July 14 2011, 16:32:31 UTC

I am going to have to read more of your stuff now! I admit I am such a sucker for Kane/Toews and that's what drew me in, but now I am looking at your tags list and I want to read all of it! :D

I have read the first two books and I just got the third from the library. I've seen all the movies, though, because a theater by where I live had a month where they played each one every weekend. (I know I am a bad person for seeing the movies before the reading the books!)
And you're right...Daniel Craig definitely makes any movie better ;)
For me, personally, it will just be so hard to live up to Noomi Rapace's Lisbeth! :)

iloveyouchicago July 14 2011, 14:26:14 UTC

Hot! I love the absolute longing that you can just feel coming from Pat. I was hoping that Jonny would slip in the showers behind him and help out but I think that would have ruined it. Love what you did!

russiantorque July 14 2011, 15:37:42 UTC

=D Thank you!~

Ironically enough, it hadn't even occurred to me for Tazer to actually slip in. I'm too much of a downer to even consider a happy ending, lol.

iloveyouchicago July 14 2011, 23:25:54 UTC

Lol. I'm the complete opposite. I want those two to be happy together forever in everything. But I actually really liked the longing feeling because we've all been there before.

Every bit, except for the hollow throbbing in his chest.

And I forgot to point this out earlier but I loved this line! Beautiful!

bergeronprocess July 14 2011, 22:36:44 UTC

ahghhhggrfffggghhhhh I think we've discussed the whole "Emma has a masturbation kink thing" before so I won't repeat myself. And even though I hate Toews as a person (he is far too whiny about not getting to play the Jets in his hometown; yeah try being me, buddy, I don't get to see my team for 41 games in their home arena CRY MOAR), I can deal with his presence here. LOL

Basically, well done!

Love these boys the most! love_baseball October 31 2011, 15:34:53 UTC

These are my favorite guys and you have showed Pat's desire (and a bit of Jonny's) so perfectly. Please write more! I can see this going along with one from Jon's POV, and then maybe their first kiss, and how it gets hot after that. You can't write too much about these guys for me. Thank you for every tidbit.