[ST] It Always Comes Around 2/2

[castofone]

Comments

[fritz42]

OMG! Crying, laughing, crying, laughing. Holy crap, I feel like I have been through a wringer. I'm all worn out, but in a good way.

Oh, the things that you put them through, with one of them reaching out and the other pulling away. I really didn't know if my poor old heart could take it. When Jim finally got a clue and went to Georgia to tell Bones that he still loved him, only to have to leave with the knowledge that Bones was getting married, the only thing that got me through that without sobbing my heart out was the knowledge that they would get together.

Fantastic addition to your wonderful 'verse!

"T"

PS I think I am going to have to go read The Harvard Medical Hoodie Corollary and In Which Len Receives a Second Nickname to solidify it in my mind that all is well between the two.

[castofone]

I think part of what kept me from fully writing the time between those two stories was that I knew it wasn't going to be easy. And just realistically for the verse, they had to be a part for a while.

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

And re-reading other parts of the verse are encouraged as I know I did a few times trying to make sure I have the continuity right.

[opalineegwene]

Oh, thank god! Not that I didn't know where this was eventually going, but your original cliffhanger was only the beginning and I feel like I've been put through the wringer worrying about the boys' lives apart. Awesome job here.

[castofone]

It was a comedy of errors, each getting the timing wrong, they all suffered a little, but it works out in the end. Thanks for reading!

[rogueangel1998]

Oh my. That was an emotional roller coaster. I'm exhausted. I need a nap. I need a valium. I mean, I knew how it ended, but...were they ever going to get there? My heart hurts just thinking about what they went through.

Awesome story.

RA

And this really doesn't matter and dont' take it the wrong way - but there were some repeat paragraphs and word ommisions/additions that occurred ocasionally. I'm only telling you beause I'd want to know if it was my story.

Now, I'm going to go reread Leonard gets a nickname. Ah, boys...so happy they end up together.

[castofone]

Yeah, I took the whole 'romantic comedy' thing a bit liberally.

And thanks for letting me know about the word repeats/omissions, I will go back through and double check for that.

[fairyniamh]

I feel as if I have run the emotion gamut and have the battle scars to prove. This was a lovely story that had me on pins and needles. Wonderful Job.

[castofone]

Thanks for reading.

[secretsolitaire]

Oh, goodness, this was painful to read, the way they kept missing each other! I was hoping maybe Winona was the one getting married there at the end -- very glad to be right. ♥

[castofone]

Of course it had to be his mom. Although writing some vague, could be misunderstood dialogue for the ring scene was key to the possibility that is might also be Jim.