fic: Wake Up, Little Susie (Cook/Archuleta)

[lordnelson100]

Wake Up, Little Susie

Description: David Archuleta has a terrible, horrible,  no good, very bad day.  And night. Cook might be there, too. In which olives, overly helpful waiters, MWK, Sponge Bob, 19E, strange dreams,  internet memes, and TMZ also make an appearance.
DC/DA
PG-13. Approx 8000 words.

Entry Level

David Archuleta was having a horrible day.

Comments

[lomedet]

hey - I'm excited to read your story. Do you think you could put it under a cut-tag so it doesn't eat my flist? thanks!

[lomedet]

and now that I've read it - this was really fun! thank you for sharing.

[misskatieleigh]

that was kind of awesome.

[lordnelson100]

in a sleepless sort of way?

[misskatieleigh]

and totally a rainy sort of seattle way. maybe. but I'd also like more, so feel free to continue the awesome.

;)

[daughterjudy53]

"One night, he had this dream. In it, he and David Cook were walking down a long, darkened hall, and Cook was wearing this dark jacket embroidered in sorcerous-looking swirls of red, and the low light glinted on his hair and beard and cast deep shadows on his serious face. He looked grim and beautiful, like he was off on some secret mission only he knew about. Cook was carrying his white guitar, so maybe they were on their way to sing

[lordnelson100]

That DC guy has been showing up in a lot of people's dreams, fer real. But it somehow became all about Archie in the writing. Glad you liked.

[snackbreak]

This was SO AWESOME OMG. Seriously, I love your David Archuleta voice and I love how you make Cook such a nice cuddlebear <3 and I love it. LOVE IT.

Did you post this to cookleta? Because they'd die of happiness, FYI.

Seriously, LOVE IT. <3 <3 <3

[lordnelson100]

Awww, thanks!

[annie2791]

I don't read very many DC/DA fics. That particular pairing just isn't my thing. But the title of this one grabbed me so I decided to give it a shot and I'm glad I did!

Really, it was amazing. I love the way you wrote it; especially Archie's rambling and it sounds exactly like the way I imagine him to really be.

Great job!

Oh, and big kudos for using an Eric Clapton song. He's one of my favorites :)

[lordnelson100]

Hee, I'm glad the title sucked you in--I kept wandering into the classic fic plot realm of "oh noes everyone thinks we slept together!" and once the song popped into my mind, and the alarm clock scene, everything grew from there.....