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Dichotomy III

Apr 15, 2009 14:45

title: Dichotomy III
Pairing : Rorschach/ Nite Owl II
Warnings : none
summary : Rorschach and sugar. Daniel and weight.
time period: 1976

Rorschach took his toast with peanut butter, bananas and honey. He drank milk with honey.
AT THE SAME TIME. Dan stared in horrified fascination.

"Rorschach, why... why so much sugar?"

"Extra energy, Daniel." he ( Read more... )

rorschach, watchmen, dichotomy

Comments 8

snake_easing April 16 2009, 04:05:15 UTC

Wow, I really heard R's voice in this one. That doesn't happen a lot.

thank-you for the kind feedback! runninglonely April 16 2009, 14:19:36 UTC

Thank-you. I don't know what to say. More in a short while.

nice_faces April 16 2009, 17:21:47 UTC

"Eat less often, WOMAN."

Hahahahaha, oh my god, this is awesome.

But :( about the ending! Awww...

Thank-you! runninglonely April 16 2009, 17:27:51 UTC

^O^ I'm very pleased to get a laugh.

okami_hu April 16 2009, 19:39:08 UTC

Dan swallowed thickly. It just wasn't fair. Dan slumped on the table and groaned, forehead on the table.
He mumbled, "It's not fair. --> Word repetitions galore, watch it.

runninglonely April 16 2009, 21:31:48 UTC

Yeah, I guess I'm a little bad for that. That's what I get for writing most of these while undergoing sleep depravation from switching to sleeping at night instead of the day. I'll fix that right now. Thank-you very much Okami Hu.

hocus April 17 2009, 03:05:57 UTC

What's next on list, not being able to catch handsome man?

i cackled, and then the ending made me sadface. but still, really great job! i'm loving all of these little fics very much. :)

runninglonely April 17 2009, 06:38:02 UTC

I didn't mean it to be sad.
More like a "d'aww, look at the misunderstanding, haha"
Happy you cackled. I sure did when I wrote it.