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runninglonely

Dichotomy X

Apr 26, 2009 21:17

Title : Dichotomy X
Warnings : child abuse
Pairings : n/a
Time period : 1951/2
summary : Prostitutes and child pornography; unlike peanut butter and chocolate, not two great tastes that taste great together.

Walter came home from school, and was greeted at the door by a woman not his mother.
"Hey Baby, c'mere and let me look a'chu." Walter ( Read more... )

rorschach, watchmen, dichotomy

Comments 24

gothic_tampons April 27 2009, 15:41:35 UTC

Wow. Thats really all I can say, this is so heatbreaking and really explain's more about Walter being fucked up, I can so see this is canon.
Please write more, I have really been loveing your Dichtomy's, they are really beautiful and touching, dispite being graphic and very sad at some points. :)

Thank-you! runninglonely April 28 2009, 00:10:32 UTC

Thanks for another great review Gothic Tampons!
Well in my head, every part of dichotomy I write is a record of something that happened, but ehh...
I'm a crazy person who sees a spectre of Rorschach and hears her voice in his head sometimes, demanding to write his story. Hurm, graphic huh? Please elabourate. I haven't written a sex scene for this series yet, (um, if I ever do) so I'm quite curious.

por_queeee April 27 2009, 20:50:30 UTC

That was wonderful, as always! It definitely seems like a plausible situation. Damn Walter's mom was a bitch D:

Thank-you! runninglonely April 28 2009, 00:12:58 UTC

Thanks Porky!
Yeah, she was. She might even be a bigger bitch than Kyle's mom(and she's a super kamehameha super bitch)!

Re: Thank-you! por_queeee April 28 2009, 19:11:58 UTC

If that was a South Park reference we might have to be bffs now.

Re: Thank-you! runninglonely April 28 2009, 20:07:03 UTC

Indeed it was. <333
Feel free to add me to msn or whatever anytime.

__perplexity__ April 27 2009, 23:18:52 UTC

I've been silently reading your Dichotomy series for the past few nights (late to the party!), and I can't resist speaking up this time.
That was horrible. But, you know, in the way it was meant to be. I really feel a bit shaken after reading this (which is only intensified because my flatmate is trying to talk crap at me and I'm focusing on reading this XD).
I really thing that one of the most horrible things is how Walter did do something, he did run away, but in the end it got him nowhere. It's like he made the decision not to take it, but that decision totally fell through.

So much was (wisely) left unsaid in the GN that I could easily accept this as canon.

The last line was amazing. No going back from that point.
Seriously, I'm sorry to ramble, but I'm fangirling this series like you wouldn't believe.
(I hope you don't mind, but I need to comment on the last part too ^-^;;)

Thank-you! runninglonely April 28 2009, 00:19:04 UTC

Story of his life, IMO. He spends his entire life going from one ultimately futile situation to another. Amazing? *blush* and here I was worried the last line was a bit awkward. Good to know it's getting positive responses.

Also, you've READ my writing and you're worried about rambling to ME? *ROFL*

Oh lord no, I'm a total review whore. Please, if the fancy takes you, leave a comment on everything you read. It really does make me happy, which SHOULDN'T make me further motivated, but somehow does. :P I'm like that fucker in the neverending story watching Artec sink in the bog of sorrow or whatever.

Re: Thank-you! __perplexity__ April 28 2009, 00:39:41 UTC

XD your referring to the neverending story in such a blunt way literally made me lol right here (which does mean that now, aforementioned flatmate is convinced I'm actually genkier again XD)
Really, I'll be speaking up in any future parts you should post - I'm very sorry for being crap and not commenting on the others. I just get a bit self-conscious and afraid of people going "Oh that's her again e.e". But heck, if I've got an invitation I'll go to the party!